The Night That We Fell In Love(repost)

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Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

0 posted 2001-03-28 11:08 PM

Since I got nice responses from my last poem, I've decided to release another pretty one....enjoy!!

It was a quiet night on the beach,
as you and I, walked hand-in-hand
as the moonlight, kissed the calm sea,
while the wind, blew away sand.

I found a soft spot on the ground
and held your body in my arms.
Together, you and I sat down
as, I protected you from harm.

Our passion began to rise
and soon, we began to kiss.
Then, I looked into your beautiful eyes
and felt, the ultimate bliss, of happiness.

And from that glorious day on,
eternal happiness, was born.
Her eyes sparkled like the stars above,
on the night, that we fell in love.

[This message has been edited by Nate Dogg (edited 03-28-2001).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-03-28 11:10 PM

Well, it just doesn't get any better than this..how romantic, and you protecting her with your body, what a guy!!!!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-03-28 11:11 PM

I'm thinking I like it very much when you do pretty poetry Nate..

very very much!

SEA

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-03-29 12:42 PM

Our passion began to rise
and soon, we began to kiss.
Then, I looked into your beautiful eyes
and felt, the ultimate bliss, of happiness.

And from that glorious day on,
eternal happiness, was born.
Her eyes sparkled like the stars above,
on the night, that we fell in love.
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pretty YES!! and romantic and cadence kissed
wonderful imagery and expression as well.'
"pretty" suits your poetry Nate

glad you reposted poet sir.. well done.

oh you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
my body aches to breathe your breath
your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

4 posted 2001-03-29 12:47 PM

Beautiful words. It's hard not to fall in love when you have moonlight, sand, and a guy who can write such pretty poetry. She is a lucky girl.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2001-03-29 03:51 AM

I knew you had it in you! glad I dropped in after being gone awhile...what an emotion...it still exists, hmmm.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-03-29 09:09 PM

Nate, glad that you took my advice. . .

. . .

Let's see some more man!!!

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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2001-03-29 09:53 PM

indeed a lovely scene here, it took me to the beach, where I seem to live these days...very nice Natt Dogg and thank you...

Greeneyes~

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"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown

Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

8 posted 2001-03-30 08:50 AM

Nate, I really like the softer side of you. What a beautiful memory of the night you fell in love.

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

9 posted 2001-03-30 01:43 PM

Ahhhh you have another hit! We, ladies love a good romantic poem..you wrote such a very lovely one, Nate.

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2001-03-30 01:46 PM

Oh what a night...James

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