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Open Poetry #13

Dancing With June

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2001-03-28 08:40 PM

Dancing With June
By: Noah Eaton
3/24/01

Her every smile is the sunshine, lighting my heart with glee
Happy lemon-lollipop skies waking my diamond-teared eyes
Her sighs are soft winds, caressing me as I dream sweet dreams
Feeling I am floating on a cloud in heaven, living in paradise
Listening to her breathe, I see nature bloom, flowers dancing ballet
Bumblebees sing in harmonic melody as the kookaburra nests itself at home
Her eyes are diamonds of the night and pearls of the day
Iridescent tears falling from happy eyes, reflecting the spring rainbow
When I look deeper into them, seeing that special place we truly share
In your lovely pupils I see the moon, promising I’ll always be faithful to you
She laughs like a choir of angels, windchimes jingle with her flowing hair
Flowers blossoming all at once, as the sun blushes in it’s raspberry sherbet hues
The day I fall in love in you will be the day heaven blossomed in me
Nothing is more beautiful than Dancing Than June, my eternal spring

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

1 posted 2001-03-29 01:00 AM

feels like it was written from the heart...

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

2 posted 2001-03-29 07:09 PM

Rmnance is sweet to the ear.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2001-03-29 07:13 PM

It must have been wonderful to have been this young once. I have almost forgotten. Joyce

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-03-30 11:10 PM

She laughs like a choir of angels, windchimes jingle with her flowing hair
Flowers blossoming all at once, as the sun blushes in it’s raspberry sherbet hues

Like the above lines the most!

I think there's a typo in the last line that kind of fights with the title of the piece.

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