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0 posted 2001-03-28 06:40 PM



This music is made for dancing
Slow tempo……….erotic beat
That look in your eyes
Only adds to the heat


The melody is designed
To invite touch of skin
Yes here…………yes there…….
Flesh smoldering sin

With each step we take
Around the dance floor
My heart beats faster
...........a wanting of more


Ummmm……… that's nice
Hips push and sway
This slow dance
Has become……………foreplay

Your lips find temple
Mouth and chin
As they slide down my neck
………..explosions within………

on shaky legs
we finish the dance
'tis only the beginning
of tonight's romance……………



~SEA~

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1 posted 2001-03-28 06:45 PM


Sea,

Cooool! Enjoyed the dance.  Panne

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2 posted 2001-03-28 06:58 PM


Oh baby....
somebody better warn hubby to stop and get some burn cream on the way home  
this is waay cool...and waay hot!!
me thinks ya been listening to those Prince records again *L*
a little Erotic City maybe???
I just thought of something...
I'll be back  

oh you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
my body aches to breathe your breath
your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

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3 posted 2001-03-28 07:07 PM


Panne~ glad you enjoyed the dance.......

Janet~   we keep some handy   ummmmm Prince does tend to light a fire in me.....Erotic City is a good one......
then there's  Dirty Mind.......
and Feel U Up....
oh yes, Horny Toad.......
Tangerine
DO ME BABY....
and one of my most treasured favorites......Private Joy
Damn U
oh yea.....Head......


whew.......I better stop..........

he is the king of sexy........

~SEA

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4 posted 2001-03-28 07:11 PM


here ya go girlie  
this will keep ya simmering till hubby gets home ...
dont burn the meatloaf LOL





and yes... Do Me Baby is a classic  


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thank you Janet......    it's his eyes....... and his voice......but mostly, his eyes....well, when he smiles, good grief....I still have another hour before Jon gets home!!!! Maybe I'll put the movie Purple Rain on and groove........  

oh yea, no meatloaf tonight........tri tip steaks, chicken.....and potato salad........   LOL!!

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6 posted 2001-03-28 07:30 PM


um. . . SEA????  I believe that we might have a table in Adult for you if you keep writing like this. . .  

*reads it again to make sure that this is really SEA he's reading!!!*

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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Sven~ Believe it baybeee..........(I'm too shy to go into Adult.......)    SEA
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8 posted 2001-03-28 07:50 PM


This was great!!
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9 posted 2001-03-28 07:55 PM


yes-- seems to be a bit of a departure for you,, but well written as usual--  

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


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10 posted 2001-03-28 08:05 PM


SEA - lovely, senuous and lovely. Just right for dancing.

BC

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11 posted 2001-03-28 08:30 PM


Dancing can be soooo seductive. Nicely done, SEA. (o:

Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


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12 posted 2001-03-28 08:43 PM


Sans38~   thank you


Jamie~ thank you, now I'm trying to figure out what my usual style is...... if you have a way to describe it, tell me!  


BC~ slow is the best kind of dancing   thank you  

Claire~ yes, sometimes a dance can be SO intimate......   thank you

~SEA


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13 posted 2001-03-28 11:18 PM


Wow, what a hot dance...I bet y'll left the dance floor scorching in flames huh ......wonderful poem!

Nathan

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14 posted 2001-03-28 11:20 PM


SEA Style

You give new meaning
to reading the Sea
few sailors would have
the way or the means
a style that is soft
and romantic as well
seldom in darkness
does your ship sail
she navigates deep waters
and shallows unafraid
the laughter she shares
when the way is rough
the course is stayed
love is the mainsail
romance at the helm
hope is the wind
and family her realm


Sorry, but you asked..rofl

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


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15 posted 2001-03-28 11:25 PM


Oh Jamie, you just melted my heart.........yes, I did ask, and I thank you, with all my mushy melted heart   SEA
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16 posted 2001-03-29 12:42 PM


There is nothing like music to bring out the best of a woman, who in turn, makes a man be all that he can be - you go girl!  Fantastic job on this.
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17 posted 2001-03-29 12:45 PM


OOOOOOOOOO girlie...so HOT HOT HOT
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18 posted 2001-03-29 04:04 AM


read..loved..library material..comment for real later.  
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19 posted 2001-03-29 08:26 AM


Am I supposed to be able to walk and talk after that. I have got to go find my wife now- holy invoking batman
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20 posted 2001-03-29 08:38 AM


Oh! I loved this one, I love to dance, been a long time, don't laugh but I wish they'd bring back disco.... Loved this one, SEA

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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Mysteria~   thank you  

Paula~ tsssss!     thank you  

Temptress~ thank you very much!  

James B~ LOL go get her!!  

Kathleen~ I wouldn't laugh at you......always with you, never at you.....besides, I love disco too......

~SEA

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22 posted 2001-03-29 02:34 PM


Very Nice SEA. Nothing like a dance to get things moving...He waltzed into my heart, as he danced me around the room
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23 posted 2001-03-29 02:46 PM


You incurable romantic....
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24 posted 2001-03-29 03:49 PM


I just had to reply to this one SEA. My oh my oh my...hey now. *S* What lovely visions you weave in this brain of mine. Mind if I insert myself into this poem? *S*
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25 posted 2001-03-29 04:06 PM


Don't know how i missed this earlier,,, looking for my dance card i guess.

This was lovely...
Bernie
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kitkat~  thank you  

Sunshine~ guilty!  

PK~ I think you and I on a dance floor, would be downright dangerous!    Glad you liked this  

~SEA

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Bernie, you snuck in there on me... thank you so much...   SEA
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28 posted 2001-03-29 04:17 PM


Well SEA, there's always the dance floor in my mind. *S*
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29 posted 2001-03-29 04:26 PM


well, if it's in your mind then by all means.......dance the night away......   SEA
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30 posted 2001-03-29 04:56 PM


Ummmm……… that's nice
Hips push and sway
This slow dance
Has become……………foreplay

is really very nice and sexy.....like....

I love to nice poetry.

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31 posted 2001-03-29 05:18 PM


Somewhere, I'm sure, our minds are dancing right now. *S*
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32 posted 2001-03-29 06:04 PM


You are quite welcome -- (did ya notice there was a line missing?--heh)....

"Dance the Night Away"--one of my fav songs!!

Have you seen her? So fine and pretty
Fooled me with her style and ease
And I feel her from across the room
Yes, it's love in the third degree

Ooh, baby baby
Won't-cha turn your head my way?
Ooh, baby baby
Ah come on! Take a chance
You're old enough to

Dance (Dance) the night away
Whoa-oh (Ah) Come on g-girl, dance the night away

A live wire, barely a beginner
But just watch that lady go
She's on fire, 'cause dancin' gets her higher than-uh
Anything else she knows

Ooh, baby baby
Won't-cha turn your head my way?
Ooh, baby baby
Well don't skip romance 'cause
You're old enough to

Dance (Dance) the night away
Oh-oh-oh (Ah) Come on g-girl, dance the night away

Oh, oh-oh-oh oh yeah

(Guitar Solo)

Dance (oh) the night away. Hey, hey, yeah!
Dance, dance, dance the night away
Ah come on baby (Dance the night away) Hey, hey yeah!
Dance, dance, dance the night away
Uh, come on baby, baby (Dance the night away) Ooh, ooh, yeah
Dance, dance, dance the night away. Ah, ha ow!

ps--Van Halen...for those that might have been born just last week etc...

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


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33 posted 2001-03-29 06:15 PM




I have this on excellent authority(mine): dance is a mandatory form of foreplay. If they can't dance, they can't dance. If you get my meaning. lol

"I am not now that which I have been."

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yea, Jamie, love Van Halen!!  

there is one by Prince on his Rave un2the Joy Fantastic

it's called "The Sun, Moon, and Stars".....it's great.......   SEA

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JL~   oh yes, I believe it! Like kissing too....if he can't kiss........   
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36 posted 2001-03-29 08:05 PM


A sensual woman,
and a good cook, too!
I'm thankful I know one, also.

My wife and I often hold each other,
kissing as we dance to "oldies".
It was the way we first interacted,
so many years ago.
Thanks for the confirmation.
Great stuff, SEA.



"The poet is the priest of the invisible."
Wallace Stevens

[This message has been edited by coyote (edited 03-29-2001).]

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37 posted 2001-03-29 08:12 PM


Coyote~ that is wonderful...some of my favorite memories involve dancing.....thank you    SEA
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