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dedicated to my teacher
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DreamLess Member
since 2001-02-28
Posts 92 |
2 days ago something happened between me and my teacher and i admitt i was wrong and like she said she lost her trust in me and was very shocked by what I did ,so i wrote this poem to apology from her and i say to her ( please forgive me) (SORRY) A word i think I have to say , but I couldn't deal with it and say it face to face, I re-thought about what I did this day, and I guess you were right I made the wrong choice, maybe there is this (HONESTY) you said that I miss , but still I'm just young just pray for me to learn, I'm out of words now but all I want to say , I admitt I was wrong , I'm sorry Irepeat it again, WRITTEN BY ME..(17 YRS HIGHSCHOOL GIRL) |
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Panne415 Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 104San Antonio |
Dreanless, All I can say is, if I were your teacher, I'd be darn proud to get this. Whatever you did wrong it seems that your parents and teachers taught you to not be too afraid or too stubborn or too proud to admit when you are wrong and to apologize. Panne |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Dreamless....eloquence begins in the heart. If the heart is humble, and truthful, beautiful words cannot help but flow...as here. Bob |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
This was great admitting wrongs, and then admiting that one is big enough to say so. Bernie a  a day keeps the world 'GBernie Slicker |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well done DreamLess. . . it's a good sign when we can admit that we're wrong. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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