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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-03-28 08:42 AM


Sweet Love

All I wanted was you and me
to be together as one.
I didn't think it was
too much to ask.
For awhile you seemed
to be the one
and together we had
lots of fun.
Now I'm not sure anymore
if our love lives or dies
yet in my heart lives a memory
of two lovers that never say goodbye.
So even though a warm embrace
may now be out of place
and my kiss no longer
seems to grace your lips
in my soul and in my heart
we will never be far apart.
We will always stay two lovers
eternally bound together
by a heart desiring
our sweet love forever.

Jameslee@March28,2001

© Copyright 2001 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2001-03-28 08:45 AM


James, my friend,
I can very well understand the pain... but please never give up on love, for that is eternal...

My best wishes,
Take care,
Sudhir

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2 posted 2001-03-28 09:10 AM


James~ your words are always so heart felt.......this is beautiful    SEA
Sven
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3 posted 2001-03-28 06:46 PM


James, there are very few people who believe in love like you. . .

Never give up my friend. . .

Excellent poem. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri
4 posted 2001-03-29 12:54 PM


Its gonna happen darlin
KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
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Waikiki, Hawaii
5 posted 2001-03-29 01:14 AM


wonderfully expressed. keep the faith james. it is coming.

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2004-08-14 12:45 PM


Thank each one of you for the lovely responses...James
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