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Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

0 posted 2001-03-28 02:32 AM

Alien

You
walk
so self-assuredly
in some distant world,
foreign to me.
I'm
not so positive
that I would care
to relinquish
my citizenship.
However....
a temporary visa
might
be
nice.

"HEY, DON'T THROW THAT AWAY, I MIGHT NEED IT SOMEDAY!!!" Packratmike

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

1 posted 2001-03-28 12:25 PM

OOOHHHHHHHHHHHH can I come too? Such images you put in my mind with this one Mike...

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-03-28 12:31 PM

Beam me up, I'm ready for a vacation!

Every minute you are angry, you lose 60 seconds of happiness.
- Ralph Waldo Emerson

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

3 posted 2001-03-28 02:07 PM

careful,, they make take you prisoner and never let you leave..lol--
very nice poem

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

4 posted 2001-03-30 12:04 PM

A clever contemplation. (o:

Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Panne415
Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 104
San Antonio

5 posted 2001-03-30 01:11 AM

Mike -
Cooooooool.
Panne

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

6 posted 2001-03-30 01:17 AM

James T Kirk would be proud! Now there was a man with a visa!

Seriously, I enjoyed this one... on many levels. May you live long and prosper.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2001-03-30 01:45 AM

You never know until you try...James

Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

8 posted 2001-03-30 02:05 AM

Thank you all.
This short piece was written for someone that I had admired from afar. Not quite as far as some of you have read into it.LOL

Mike

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