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a summer time dream
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a summer time dream |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
As children we play among budding trees during our early springtime afternoons beyond the branches lay summertime freedom outside the squares of little school rooms The kids start to chasing in a game of tag one boy climbs a tree, he is three maybe four he thinks of flying towards the sun next we see him on the forest floor He isn't crying, nor is he moving "my mom will kill me" his sister screams sometimes I wonder at the winter Once before a summertime dream A real man |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
First...welcome back you have been missed...and second...this just sent chills |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
What vivid imagery...a nice story! Nathan |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Good to see you jb... You're as thought-provoking as usual... Well done, my friend..  |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
hey thanks paula and natedogggggg And yes I know I should visit my aunt NAN on the coast more often, but this winter has been bad here in Maine. Love to all. J |
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