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O' Malachite Moon
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O' Malachite Moon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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O' Malachite Moon ~*Marge Tindal*~ O'green Moon of aged patina glowing you will capture and enthrall the anxious hearts of fond lovers in the sureness of knowing all of love lit with the glow from an ancient beam not nearly as simple as so it might seem all of time is written within every rhyme sent forth beauty from light in the sky Shedding light to lay upon a heartfelt sigh of remembrance aglow on this beam of rapturous beauty from your green of glowing stone O'Malachite Moon don't leave me alone *My sincerest thanks to Mysteria*~ for the lovely title for this one. *Hugs* ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
very pretty marge- oh and hi by the way I'm back A real man |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Malachite is my very favorite stone...and this is just a perfect piece of it |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now that was just sheer  , I actually started to swoon. For a second there I felt I was really under a malachite moon! I had to slap myself, as that is dangerous thinking for me  Simply bewitching Marge. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 03-27-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JBowie~ Yeah ... and I'm pleased to see you.  Thanks for the read. Paula~ I'm so glad you like it. There is 'magic' in the malachite. Mysteria~ I thank YOU for the thought that stirred this one into being - that's a whole lotta inspirational 'magic' and I greatly appreciate it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 03-28-2001).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Marge, you know I love "shaped poems!" This is creativity at it's best~ Excellent presentation and phrasing... Take care, Melissa~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ you are just too awesome! This is great!! SEA |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I am mooned again... Regards to you, O Marge, Sudhir |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Ahhh Margie...when that Luna Muse of yours calls...we reap the splendor of your moonbeams .... another lovely moonsong for my collection of Margie's constellation.  oh you speak to me in riddles |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--I saw the slivered moon last night and thought of you, Marge...hugs...this was lovely! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is so lovely, Marge, I tell ya, you just keep amazing me! Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ Thank you so much. It was your dark poem that Mysteria had commented on and in suggesting a title - this one was born. SEA~ Hugs n' thanks ! Sudhir~  JanetMarie~ I'm just tickled to think you've got a 'collection'. Corinne~ Thanks, gal. I keep trying ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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