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Mind.......Shaken..... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Make love to me Without feel of hand Touch me with your mind Make me understand Wrap me up In your poetry Let your voice Rhyme sinfully Let magic of thought Stimulate and tease Let gift of rhythm Caress and please Make my knees weak With your imagination Speak to me Of intellectual fascination Raise my conscious Up to new heights Give me tongue twisters …………mindful delights give and take with quick witted prose fast and smart to curl my toes now just gently whisper in ear so that only I am able to hear……… ~SEA~ |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Oh dear, you have unleashed this on a forum of men who will gladly take care of your desires. "give and take with quick witted prose fast and smart to curl my toes" |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
your writing gets better and better..... excellent, girl!!! i SEA what you are trying to say so vividly....  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Inot2B~ let's hope Doreen~ wow...thank you so much! That's so nice of you to say  ~SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Make love to me Without feel of hand Touch me with your mind Make me understand Wrap me up In your poetry Let your voice Rhyme sinfully Let magic of thought Stimulate and tease Let gift of rhythm Caress and please Make my knees weak With your imagination Speak to me Of intellectual fascination ============================= YES... that is it EXACTLY ... you have penned how poetry can be sensual and sexy and enticing for the mind, spirit, and body... Like Poetic Oysters ... Sexy Brain food LOL very very cool write Sea... yes,one of your best here and a new fav of mine. I love that first verse ... You keep writing like this an Im gonna have to make ya an official moth *L* We meet at the blue flame club, Its my week to bring singe-proof mascara and raspberry tea oh you speak to me in riddles |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
love it Janet....I'll bring the aloe vera gel......  |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I enjoyed this, and think that the request would be gladly met here. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I love it when the title doesn't give me a clue to what is waiting. Very cool idea. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
LOL girlie...you know there are laws about inciting a riot...hehehe |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is very sensual, SEA wow=! Kathleen Blake |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Now this is just wonderful ! And ......  Only JanetMarie could have come up with - 'Poetic Oysters' LOL ! Well, this one is surely a pearl ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
oh......just .....oh wow SEA. Where does this come from? This is up there with your best, possibly THE best. Every line is cool, and very, very sensual. Off to take a cold shower now. You sure know how to stir things up. *S* |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Temptress~ thank you JLR~ glad you liked this, thank you Paula~a riot 'eh? ( cool ) Kathleen~ thanks Margie~Thank you so much! PK~ it just comes from me...........your poetry does tend to lend inspiration I'm so glad you liked this ~SEA |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Me? Little ol' me inspiring? I think its the other way around. *S* |
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