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Open Poetry #13

- Swan Song Haiku -

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2001-03-27 07:16 PM

Swan Song

Heartstrings compose love
mellifluous melody
swan passion kindled

~*By Melissa Honeybee*~

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-03-27 07:27 PM

Wow! One of these days, I am going to try this form. I love it!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-03-27 08:15 PM

Melissa~ you do these masterfully.....love this

SEA

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2001-03-27 08:20 PM

Love this.

KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

4 posted 2001-03-28 01:17 AM

*giggles"...swans necking?

i loved this . You do these so masterfully my friend!

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

5 posted 2001-03-28 03:37 AM

well done

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-04-02 01:21 AM

Melissa~
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

7 posted 2001-04-02 05:17 PM

The swans were a gift, and then the beautiful format of short form. Excellence!

"I am not now that which I have been."

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-04-02 05:19 PM

Melissa,

Very nice haiku and wonderful graphic! This reminds me of all those summers at the lake when I was younger. The swans would always come by looking for food. They were so accustomed to people they'd eat out of your hand. Had to be careful though, those teeth are sharp!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

9 posted 2001-04-02 09:34 PM

~Thank you everyone!

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