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vandana
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0 posted 2001-03-27 06:43 PM



Won't you?,
Ask me
how I feel for you?
Won't you asked me
How much I love you?
Won't you love me?
Even though,
We are not so close,
Won't you take my hand?
Won't you make my heart happy?
I love,
promise ,
Will love you
till the end,
Won'y you ask me?
Won't you ask me
how much I care for you?
Won't you touch me?
If you are In love with me,
Iam in love with you,
So that Is why
Iam asking you so much?
Will you take me
Into your arms?
Will you make yours?
I don't care ,
If the sun don't come out ,
Let It rain,
Because love only matters to me,
Won't you?,my Darling,
Touch me,
Touch me
With your loving hands,
Tell me
how much you care ,
Won't you?,my darling


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Sven
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1 posted 2001-03-27 06:47 PM


vandana. . . you never cease to amaze me. . . this is wonderful. . .

congratulations on your 1,200th. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-03-27 08:05 PM


Congratulations!  Vandana, this is sincere and loving.........

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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