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Wet Once Again |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
The waves wash over me Whispers in my ear Haunting melody A song I’ve come to fear Pulls me down below Drowns me in its tears Tells me where to go But I remain right here And my soul cries out in pain Grips me endlessly The darkness comes with rain Comes to carry me And I would fall from grace If they would let me be In the waves I see your face Looking back at me |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
this is very lovely... in rhythm, cadence, emotion, and tenderness.... i liked the title, too! LOL  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ok PK, I've decided. . . you and I were indeed twins in another life . . . this is superb. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"In the waves I see your face Looking back at me" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ oh yes, I do..... the ache just vibrates through excellent!  SEA |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
hip to hip....*bump* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Pulls me down below Drowns me in its tears Tells me where to go But I remain right here And my soul cries out in pain Grips me endlessly The darkness comes with rain Comes to carry me And I would fall from grace If they would let me be In the waves I see your face Looking back at me =============================== yep, always felt the depths of this cadence kissed gem. "And I would fall from grace If they would let me be" always loved that line ... we're all just looking for a soft place to fall. beautiful emotive piece PK. oh you speak to me in riddles |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Doreen - Thanks. It almost sounds like a porn title huh? *L* Sven - Who knows my friend? Thanks. SEA - Thanks as always. You're beautiful. Hip to hip hmmmmmm....*L* Janet - I know you like this one, and I am glad you do. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LOL!!! It DOES almost sound like a porn title...........too funny........... hip to hip......again.......*bump* SEA |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Dirty minds think alike SEA. *L* Now once again, hip to hip...*S* Now we're doing the 'Hustle'.... [This message has been edited by PoeticKnight (edited 03-28-2001).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
stop it........*L*.........yes, they do the hustle.........(to steal a word from Janet) "GROOVY"  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think I just got a bit of salty spray in my face.....a good write PK.... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I liked this very, very much Kathleen Blake |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Haunting indeed, my friend. Oh those echos of the past..........You leave me only to wonder "Do you ever write anything bad???"
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful, in a haunting sort of way. Very well done. LW All writing comes |
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