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ParisGrl
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0 posted 2001-03-27 03:44 PM


Looking for my way out from underneath your controlling ways
I know somewhere out there for me lies better days
You and your control-my heart can take no more
Please tell me why you do this to me?
When I have done nothing to you
You put words in my mouth that I've never even thought of
You ask me stupid questions time and time again
You get me so frustrated that I cannot stand to be around you
You wonder why I spend more time with my friends, at work and school-than I do with you
Look in the mirror, you will see  your answer
I have had enough and am now.....
Looking for my way out.

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JLR
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1 posted 2001-03-27 04:32 PM


Good one Laura!  The longer you allow the control to go on, the harder it is to break away from.  Now, if i can just start following my own advice.  Ha!  

Take care---RJ

ParisGrl
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2 posted 2001-03-27 04:54 PM


R.J.

Thanks!  I'm trying.....there is a long road ahead of me.  You give great advice.  :-)

*Laura*

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-03-27 06:14 PM


Excellent writing...seems your desire to be done with this will take you out...James
Sven
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4 posted 2001-03-27 06:49 PM


Laura, RJ, allow me to give both of you the same advice. . .  

great poem Laura. . . take those first steps. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

kaile
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5 posted 2001-03-28 03:36 AM


kaile here

i applaud you..admitting that something is wrong is never easy but you have done so...now that you have identified the crucial step, i wish you well in conquering your problem...it won't be easy i guess...but do remember that you have people like me rooting for you...

take care

ParisGrl
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6 posted 2001-03-28 10:08 AM


James Michael,

Thank you for reading. :-)

John,

Thank you my friend, from the bottom of my heart, for your kind words and freindship.

Kaile,

Where have you been??? LOL  Thank you for rooting for me....it means alot.  e-mail me sometime.

*Laura*  


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