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Angels in the sky |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Hello Passions...it's been a while huh? Well I'm just letting y'll know that I'm still here....I'm gonna give y'll something pretty today cause, it's been a while since y'll read a pretty poem from me...enjoy!! Last night, I saw angels in the sky, flying on golden wings way up high as their presence, produced an aurora, that shined and sparkled like water. There was four black and white angels singing on a beautiful, glowing rainbow as they sang songs in their soprano voices, songs of love, peace, happiness, and rejoice. It was absolutely one of the best times of my life, as my happiness shined vibrantly through the night. I wished that the night would never end or cease because never before, have I found so much peace. Throughout the night, the four, beautiful angels sang and sang away, but when the earth opened her eyes, the angels silently faded away. [This message has been edited by Nate Dogg (edited 03-27-2001).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Nate~ this is beautiful.....good job on the pretty!  I enjoyed SEA |
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Jellybean King Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 153Jelly, Bean |
Gorgeous descriptions! The reader gets a sense of how private and inspiring the moment is, because... "when the earth opened her eyes, the angels silently faded away." ...it's like this was a private moment only to be shared with the viewer and reader. Thanks for sharing! Jellybean King |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Looks like we're both back..hope you plan to stay for awhile too!  ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
hi Nate, loved reading your come back poem.. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Nate, you have done good and given us a small look of between dark and light of day. You paint a pretty picture. ME |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
"Throughout the night, the four, beautiful angels sang and sang away, but when the earth opened her eyes, the angels silently faded away." Now I know why so many want to stay in bed so late. Who'd want to wake up when they have all that beautiful music being sung. You have out done yourself. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading your poem Nate...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you know something Nate??? we need more pretty poems from you. . . welcome back my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wow, thanks for all the wonderful responses.... Thank you Sea, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you Jellybeans, for describing from a unique perspective. Thank you Devina and welcome back! Thank you Charisma for replying. Thank you ME for realizing what I was talking about. Thank you Jimmy, for reading. Thank you Inot, for quoting me. Thank you Sven for your nice comments...maybe I will give Passions more pretty poem..I certainly have some stashed away......peace everyone! Nathan |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
yanno... this is pretty Jamie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nate, my friend~ Yes .... you nailed it ! But ... maybe it's beyond pretty~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I thought this was just lovely and it is always nice to mention angels in a poem, I know I have many times. Thank you......Sue |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
sweet descriptions... the words here help to take away that "you had to be there feeling"... cause these words really paint the picture! a beautiful vision. You gotta love livin, cause dyin's a pain in the ass. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you Ethan, Marge, Suetang and Jamie, for your wonderful comments!!! Nathan |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Ah Nathan...your angels were there when you needed them to be...such a glorious sight they were.... |
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