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Open Poetry #13

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tradewind
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since 2001-03-25

Posts 101

0 posted 2001-03-27 12:26 PM

my vulnerablilities hung
like broken fingers

you introduced yourself
as a friend

shook my hand

Katherine Chandler
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 280
Florida, USA

1 posted 2001-03-27 12:30 PM

Very good, tradewind. Few words that said so much.

Kate

Blessings

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-03-27 12:50 PM

Wow...and I read this very little bit, several ways...

tradewind
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since 2001-03-25

Posts 101

3 posted 2001-03-27 04:49 PM

Kate and Sunshine, thanks so much for liking this little one!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-04-03 09:18 PM

yes, there's something about a handshake ..

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-04-03 10:24 PM

You say a lot with few words. Very nice.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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