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Honey I Love You

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JamesMichael
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0 posted 03-27-2001 10:33 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

Honey I Love You

Honey I cried when you left me.
But you knew that.
It was more than a sad cry.
It was laced with some happiness.
Thank God for that.
Oh yes I wanted her more than anyone in this world.
I was already in the middle of my sadness
as I awoke to another morning sans her smile.
And for the love of God I hate to miss her warm sweet kiss.
I feel as if this is way too soon for all the
beautiful times we shared
to become only memories in two hearts that cared.
Still I honestly do love her and I respect her desire to be free.
Everyone needs to follow the road to happiness
and love has opened my eyes to the realization
that her happiness may or may not rest with me.
Honey I was worried that my actions hurt you or scared you away.
But now I realize it wasn't me after all.
It was your heart trying to find the way.
I cry for the precious experiences we shared as one.
Nothing will erase the beauty of those moments from my heart.
Nor no one.

Jameslee@March26,2001
forthebeautifulmulti-talented
Michelle
travelwriter,worldtraveler
andsongwriter.
HoneyILoveYu

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (edited 03-27-2001).]

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doreen peri
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1 posted 03-27-2001 11:23 AM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

"It was your heart trying to find the way."

great line.... lucky Michelle...... what an understanding man you seem to be .... and how hard it is to lose a Love..... but the memories will always fill your heart

(and honey, i love you, too... hehe *wink*)
Rosebud1229
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2 posted 03-27-2001 11:57 AM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosebud1229

how hard it is, even when one does understand, the love is still there, and it' is of the deepest love when you know deep within your heart, that you must let go.
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3 posted 03-27-2001 11:58 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

you must just have the biggest heart.....James, I wish you nothing but love.... SEA
Sudhir Iyer
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4 posted 03-27-2001 12:00 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Sadly though, we seem to be on the same boat, my friend...

I hope things get better soon for you, James...

Take Care,
My regards,
Sudhir
Katherine Chandler
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5 posted 03-27-2001 02:22 PM       View Profile for Katherine Chandler   Email Katherine Chandler   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Katherine Chandler

James, I wish you love. 'Tis been my experience that love does return and will bless again.   Kate

Blessings

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

devina
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6 posted 03-27-2001 03:13 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I can only imagine how much emotion was released in this poem...time for smiles and new beginnings sweet man....my best regards!

~D

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


Charisma
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7 posted 03-27-2001 03:33 PM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

heartfelt poem, I wish you love as I know that you have a great heart,shining through your words. excellent penned right my friend.

((warm hugs))
Charisma
Sven
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8 posted 03-27-2001 07:10 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

James. . . you know that I wish for you what you most deserve. . . a woman to heal your heart. . .

this is excellent my friend. . . such an outpouring of emotion. . . I can feel the sadness. . . I know it well. . .

------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

KokoStewartKoomoa
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9 posted 03-28-2001 01:11 AM       View Profile for KokoStewartKoomoa   Email KokoStewartKoomoa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit KokoStewartKoomoa's Home Page   View IP for KokoStewartKoomoa

excellent and full of aloha James! I enjoyed this bittersweet poem. take care

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko


Paula Finn
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10 posted 03-28-2001 12:17 PM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paula Finn

Have I told you lately how fantastic you are? I didnt think so...you are you know...love ya sweetest friend
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11 posted 03-28-2001 06:00 PM       View Profile for bslicker   Email bslicker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bslicker

have been there, am there right now... how did you write what i am thinking.... oh well you did and so well too....
Bernie
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Bernie Slicker

JamesMichael
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12 posted 09-22-2006 06:19 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you doreen, Rosebud, Sea, Sudhir, Katherine, devina, Charisma, Sven, Koko, sweet Paula and bslicker for the generous kind words...
Visiting my sons and brothers and sisters in L.A. in December...hope to see Michelle also in L.A...James
 
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