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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-03-27 10:33 AM


Honey I Love You

Honey I cried when you left me.
But you knew that.
It was more than a sad cry.
It was laced with some happiness.
Thank God for that.
Oh yes I wanted her more than anyone in this world.
I was already in the middle of my sadness
as I awoke to another morning sans her smile.
And for the love of God I hate to miss her warm sweet kiss.
I feel as if this is way too soon for all the
beautiful times we shared
to become only memories in two hearts that cared.
Still I honestly do love her and I respect her desire to be free.
Everyone needs to follow the road to happiness
and love has opened my eyes to the realization
that her happiness may or may not rest with me.
Honey I was worried that my actions hurt you or scared you away.
But now I realize it wasn't me after all.
It was your heart trying to find the way.
I cry for the precious experiences we shared as one.
Nothing will erase the beauty of those moments from my heart.
Nor no one.

Jameslee@March26,2001
forthebeautifulmulti-talented
Michelle
travelwriter,worldtraveler
andsongwriter.
HoneyILoveYu

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (edited 03-27-2001).]

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doreen peri
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1 posted 2001-03-27 11:23 AM


"It was your heart trying to find the way."

great line.... lucky Michelle...... what an understanding man you seem to be .... and how hard it is to lose a Love..... but the memories will always fill your heart

(and honey, i love you, too... hehe *wink*)

Rosebud1229
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2 posted 2001-03-27 11:57 AM


how hard it is, even when one does understand, the love is still there, and it' is of the deepest love when you know deep within your heart, that you must let go.
SEA
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3 posted 2001-03-27 11:58 AM


you must just have the biggest heart.....James, I wish you nothing but love.... SEA
Sudhir Iyer
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4 posted 2001-03-27 12:00 PM


Sadly though, we seem to be on the same boat, my friend...

I hope things get better soon for you, James...

Take Care,
My regards,
Sudhir

Katherine Chandler
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5 posted 2001-03-27 02:22 PM


James, I wish you love. 'Tis been my experience that love does return and will bless again.   Kate

Blessings

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

devina
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6 posted 2001-03-27 03:13 PM


I can only imagine how much emotion was released in this poem...time for smiles and new beginnings sweet man....my best regards!

~D

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



Charisma
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7 posted 2001-03-27 03:33 PM


heartfelt poem, I wish you love as I know that you have a great heart,shining through your words. excellent penned right my friend.

((warm hugs))
Charisma

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8 posted 2001-03-27 07:10 PM


James. . . you know that I wish for you what you most deserve. . . a woman to heal your heart. . .

this is excellent my friend. . . such an outpouring of emotion. . . I can feel the sadness. . . I know it well. . .

------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

KokoStewartKoomoa
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9 posted 2001-03-28 01:11 AM


excellent and full of aloha James! I enjoyed this bittersweet poem. take care

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



Paula Finn
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10 posted 2001-03-28 12:17 PM


Have I told you lately how fantastic you are? I didnt think so...you are you know...love ya sweetest friend
bslicker
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11 posted 2001-03-28 06:00 PM


have been there, am there right now... how did you write what i am thinking.... oh well you did and so well too....
Bernie
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JamesMichael
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12 posted 2006-09-22 06:19 PM


Thank you doreen, Rosebud, Sea, Sudhir, Katherine, devina, Charisma, Sven, Koko, sweet Paula and bslicker for the generous kind words...
Visiting my sons and brothers and sisters in L.A. in December...hope to see Michelle also in L.A...James

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