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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I've got to be a blade in slice heated metal meets ice cold life figure eight's eternity I turn to grace in spite of me-- and as I lean into each bend I reach a hand to you again... A partner of sweet purity, I turn to coax him on with me.. backwards, glide, sublime surprise one hand in stretch to grasp of free... "follow" (whisper) "follow me..." a fingernail's entrail of reach... " Only those who risk going too far can possibly find out how far one can go." T.S. Eliot [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 03-27-2001).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
one hand in stretch to grasp of free... .. .. a fingernail's entrail of reach... ...This is fabulous... Great work, O serene one... Regards to you, Sudhir |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Skates! Where the h*** are my skates? EntICEng! Marvelous style! S Arthur Whose Night is this, Mine or the Moon's? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Wonderful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Great......Great.....Great Bernie A  a day keeps the world 'GBernie Slicker |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Very interesting imagery, makes me wonder what was going through that mind of yours. Very, very interesting. *S* |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I have to agree, this is fabulous. I was enthralled from beginning to end. Kathleen Blake |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wow....yes, this is awesome! SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
figure eight's eternity I turn to grace in spite of me-- and as I lean into each bend I reach a hand to you again... A partner of sweet purity, I turn to coax him on with me.. backwards, glide, sublime surprise one hand in stretch to grasp of free... "follow" (whisper) "follow me..." a fingernail's entrail of reach... =================================== "figure eight's eternity I turn to grace in spite of me--" gawwd I love the way your mind works me girlie... "backwards, glide, sublime surprise one hand in stretch to grasp of free... "follow" (whisper) "follow me..." a fingernail's entrail of reach... your just too cool... lick those stamps baby... send those vials *L*  oh you speak to me in riddles |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hey S,...your title, damn! All of your words, like I said, your poetry is so satisfying. Every time, your words and thoughts constructed into these, these, truly YOU type of writes, with these messages that crawl around inside of me. These little whispers (and sometimes shouts) that dance around my head all day. Thank you for all you do and share. *Peace poet. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
finely crafted my friend. . . you just get better. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sudhir....YOU are fabulous my friend! Thank you so much! S Arthur---hmmm...my psychic ability tells me that they were left behind in a move and have now been sold---time for a new pair! m.o.m.s.---You are wonderful! Miss ya much, write me and let me know how you've been...but I do understand, I've been busy too....(but write anyway, okay?) Bernie? I thank you as always for reading! Much grat! PK---what's inside my head? Let's ask Geraldo Rivera to open another vault!  Nothing there!Kathleen, as always your spirit shines in apparency, not only in your poetry, but in your replies as well! SEA? was just thinking today about what a great word "wow" is....it's like emotion left speechless....thank you! JM? JANET MARIE???? "send those vials, baby???" ROFL....that's it alert the internet police---I'll be busted for "mardi gras water" trafficking! Hey "A"----that was so touching, I do thank you! You are a remarkable writer yanno. Sven? stop me before I type "it can't get much worse!" (see? coundn't do it!) But actually, it CAN. But thanks, m'friend!With my humblest apologies to the forum----sorry I've been "absentee"--But life seems to be calling lately. Hugs to all, and curtseys---always, always, know that I appreciate your kind attention. |
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Masked Intruder
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Boo...you've got mail. *grins* |
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