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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2001-03-26 10:42 PM



broken.......beaten
almost destroyed
she went home to her parents' home
one she'd never been to before
with baby in tow
and spirit hiding......
trying to mend
not knowing
if her wings could still carry her
but desperate
to find out.........
gently
he offered her
his heart
the one she'd captured
so long ago
he had no idea
the safest place
in her heart
already
belonged to him
and the angels
sighed
smiled
reveled in the glory
of true love
~SEA~



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Mysteria
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1 posted 2001-03-27 04:03 AM


Oh this was so lovely.
Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2001-03-27 06:46 AM


"he offered her
his heart
the one she'd captured
so long ago
he had no idea
the safest place
in her heart
already
belonged to him"

Through sadness and sorrow, comes such a beautiful new beginning. This touched my heart this morning SEA, thank you for this inspirational read!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Jill
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3 posted 2001-03-27 08:20 AM


SEA - This is really beautiful.
PoeticKnight
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4 posted 2001-03-27 09:39 AM


he had no idea
the safest place
in her heart
already
belonged to him
and the angels
sighed
smiled
reveled in the glory
of true love

...SEA, beautiful this is. All the more knowing that there is reality behind this. You have such a big heart, and just from the little I do know, you are a wonderful person. Thanks for posting this.

ForwardSearching
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5 posted 2001-03-27 09:45 AM


Very nice, true love is out there for all of us. Thanks for the hope SEA.
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6 posted 2001-03-27 09:47 AM


Yes, this explains many, many things....{~,^}
SEA
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7 posted 2001-03-27 09:49 AM


Mysteria~ thank you


Kit~ .....the short story of my story..... thank you

Jill~ thank you


PK~ aren't you sweet?! thank you so much


Forward Searching~ oh yes, true love is out there.....

Sunshine~ hugs....thank you

~SEA

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8 posted 2001-03-27 10:06 AM


Now, this is the kind of thing I love to read about-true love. It really does exist doesn't it. Oh, it's good to read this.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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