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Open Poetry #13

State of confusion

poertyman2002
Junior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 32
Florida, US

0 posted 2001-03-26 10:05 PM

Sitting and thinking.
Thinking and Sitting.
Walking and sitting.
Sitting and walking.
Walking and Running.
Running and walking.
Running and Jumping.
Verb by verb.
Day by day.
Person by person.
Thought after thought.
Who am I?
Where am I?
What am I?
No.
Yes.
Sure.
Why not?
The answer is with you my son.

Poetry is sweet. Sweeter than sugar? Yes, Sweeter than me, maybe.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-03-28 07:44 PM

ah yes. . .

I like this one. . . I could feel myself looking at this person pacing the room, sitting. . . pacing. . . wondering where the answer was. . . pondering it. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-03-28 08:14 PM

I feel like this alot of the time. Never sure if I'm starting or ending.

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