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devina
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0 posted 2001-03-26 09:11 PM



*Solo*

He plays me like the strings
Of his guitar-
Smoothly, Deftly…
Bringing each note higher
To end in Sweet Crescendo…

Masterfully each stroke brings-
The weakness of the tool.
To be played “Oh So Willingly”
For the love of such a music…

*For the Love of Such A Man*


Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



© Copyright 2001 Tanya Nicole Bustamante - All Rights Reserved
snowpants
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1 posted 2001-03-26 09:22 PM


Ahh, yes...a feeling I know quite well...great write, devina!

sp

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk into the room...

Parker
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2 posted 2001-03-27 01:20 AM


sweet devina, so nice to see your words. You know how to weave the desire best... like no other.

Parker

PoeticKnight
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3 posted 2001-03-27 09:47 AM


oh cool, i just happened across this one devina. Needs to be brought to the top, people might have missed this sensual poetic piece.
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-03-27 10:03 AM


This is nice Devina...James
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5 posted 2001-03-27 11:22 AM


Devina~
You KNOW this lady is glad to see you ! !

A stirring piece, my sweet friend.
Glad to have you 'home' !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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devina
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6 posted 2001-03-27 11:43 AM


It's so nice to FINALLY be back...missed you all much!!

TY to the new poets I haven't had the opportunity to chat with!!

Parker- my sweet dear...so glad to hear from you...will be in touch soon...check your mail!

And lastly Miss Margie...I think I've missed you too much lady...hopefully I'll be back for good....Love you...

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



Sven
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7 posted 2001-03-27 12:58 PM


no one can play it like you can Devina. . . this is a perfect example. . .

you don't know how wonderful it is to have you back!!!  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Nate Dogg
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8 posted 2001-03-27 02:29 PM


Lovely poem Devina...I really enjoyed it....thanks for sharing!!

Nathan

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9 posted 2001-03-27 05:11 PM


Devina~ It's so great to see your name here again...... this is most sensual.....I liked this very much.....I hope you post more soon!    SEA
devina
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10 posted 2001-03-28 12:18 PM


Sven- TY so much my dear friend, it's good to be back... And I know you know!  

Nathan- nice to see you again m'friend! TY

SEA- hope you've been doing well...and yes, I'm planning on staying awhile!!  

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



RSEvans
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11 posted 2001-04-22 05:38 PM


again wow
confetti
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12 posted 2001-04-22 10:59 PM


Wow pretty much says it!  
Irie
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13 posted 2001-05-15 05:49 PM


BRAVO! Encore, encore!

This is, just, just perfect devina.
Oh to be strummed with such love!

How awesome to see you back here!
You've been missed!

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"



Dark Angel
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14 posted 2001-05-15 06:05 PM


This IS lovely!
Nice to read you again devina  

Maree

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