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Victoria's secret

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tradewind
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0 posted 03-26-2001 08:50 PM       View Profile for tradewind   Email tradewind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for tradewind

only for you
the negligee of dreams
falls open at a touch
welcomes you in
where wishes await
the gentle caress
of curious fingers
curving to skin

only for you
silk desires slip
soundless, from shoulders
revealing all passion
and naked, i wait
for you to know me
wearing only a smile
and loving the fashion
© Copyright 2001 tradewind - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 03-26-2001 08:52 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

this is not what I needed tonight tradewind!!!  

but I still like it!!!

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

tradewind
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2 posted 03-26-2001 09:07 PM       View Profile for tradewind   Email tradewind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tradewind

hahaha!! sorry, but thanks Sven!
inot2B
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and naked, i wait
for you to know me
wearing only a smile


All that money spent at Victoria Secrets just to end up in a nice little pile on the floor.

Packratmike
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4 posted 03-26-2001 09:21 PM       View Profile for Packratmike   Email Packratmike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Packratmike

A smile is a lovely fashion that will never go out of style.
Very nice poem.

Mike
tradewind
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5 posted 03-26-2001 11:07 PM       View Profile for tradewind   Email tradewind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tradewind

inot2B and Packratmike, thanks for the comments, glad you enjoyed.
Panne415
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6 posted 03-26-2001 11:41 PM       View Profile for Panne415   Email Panne415   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Panne415

Tradewind, This is terrific and I loved the title which was so right for this piece. Panne
Mabel A. Dilley
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7 posted 03-27-2001 12:17 AM       View Profile for Mabel A. Dilley   Email Mabel A. Dilley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mabel A. Dilley

I enjoyed this immensely. I'm still chuckling.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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8 posted 03-27-2001 12:22 AM       View Profile for Trillium   Email Trillium   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Trillium

Very seductive! Fun to read.

Betty Lou Hebert

tradewind
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Panne, Julian and Trillium, thank you for taking time to comment. glad you enjoyed the read.
Honeybee
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10 posted 03-27-2001 07:56 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee


Very clever with a creative twist of words, excellent...

Take care,
Melissa~
JamesMichael
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Sensual...James
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