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wandering
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since 2001-01-21
Posts 92


0 posted 2001-03-26 07:54 PM


Our Fingertips touch,
I feel your pulse
Mingling with mine.
Sensations race wildly,
I grasp your hand,
Tenderly, yet tightly,
So small and gentle,
So soft to the touch.
It fits so right within my palm.
When I let it go, I ache,
I fear I may lose it forever,
Since it’s taken forever
To finally hold it.
Our eyes meet,
I draw strong emotions,
From deep within
And fill the empty space between us.
Locked in your gaze,
I am helpless,
At your hearts beckon,
Yours alone.
Magnetic is your presence,
I am drawn to you,
Without will,
Without thought,
Without resistance,
Like a river to the sea,
I follow the destiny of my passion.
One heart drawn to another.
And if you could only
Read my heart,
A book opened,
Pages exposed,
For your eyes only,
You’d know all these things.
And when I hold you,
You may never know,
That moment is bliss.
No matter how short the embrace is,
It fills my soul,
With you.

lost in thought, found in words.
wanderer

© Copyright 2001 Ron Fox - All Rights Reserved
inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
1 posted 2001-03-26 08:11 PM


I'll always remember that night when I looked into his eyes and knew it would
be forever.

"Without will,
Without thought,
Without resistance,
Like a river to the sea,
I follow the destiny of my passion.




Every minute you are angry, you lose 60 seconds of happiness.
- Ralph Waldo Emerson



tradewind
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since 2001-03-25
Posts 101

2 posted 2001-03-26 08:33 PM


what a lovely poem, glad i stopped by
to read it!

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
3 posted 2001-03-26 09:27 PM


'Our Fingertips touch,
I feel your pulse
Mingling with mine.
Sensations race wildly,
I grasp your hand,
Tenderly, yet tightly,
So small and gentle,
So soft to the touch.
It fits so right within my palm.
When I let it go, I ache,
I fear I may lose it forever,
Since it’s taken forever
To finally hold it.
Our eyes meet,
I draw strong emotions,
From deep within
And fill the empty space between us'

Have you been in my head?? This poem describes EXACTLY some of the things that have been happening in my life lately!! This is outrageous!! I absolutely love this!! Definitely keeping this one...

sp

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk into the room...

bslicker
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since 2000-12-04
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state of mind
4 posted 2001-03-29 07:22 PM


fills my soul,
with you.
Great ending to the touching and feelings.
Bernie
A   a day keeps the world  'g.

Bernie Slicker

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