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Temptress
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0 posted 2001-03-26 06:57 PM


In the evening
Sun drops
Wind brings me lonliness
Another evening without your kiss
Another time without your voice
I'm beginning to hate the nights
When your absences lingers
I'm beginning to hate myself
For needing you
But I'd rather hate myself
Than ever forget you
In the evening
Sun drops
Wind brings me lonliness
Until your voice warms me again

© Copyright 2001 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 2001-03-26 06:58 PM


shhhhhhhhh. . . listen. . . the voice is never far. . .

sad and tender my friend. . .  

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Temptress
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2 posted 2001-03-26 07:05 PM


yes..thank you, Sven..mostly...sad..

inot2B
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3 posted 2001-03-26 07:25 PM


"I'm beginning to hate myself
For needing you
But I'd rather hate myself
Than ever forget you


Very lonesome lines. Hope you get to feeling better.

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4 posted 2001-03-29 07:18 PM


Lots of voices here,, Can you hear them. They will listen,  write and they will read..
nice write.
Bernie
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Bernie Slicker

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5 posted 2001-03-30 11:12 PM


Tender, sweet Temptress, very tender!
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6 posted 2001-03-31 10:21 AM


Oh, this is so lovely, and poignant as well, Jenn, this shows your beautiful heart.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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