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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 2001-03-26 04:49 PM


She is music of most melodic type
As if the wind through angels create her
Of bangles, golden harps and silver pipes,
One must be hallowed by God to hear her
She carries clearly, ever so clearly
And all stop short to listen to her song
That those angels created so dearly
With notes on measures delicate, yet strong
She can whisper a soft and slow cadence,
And rise in quickening notes of glory
Each chord a specific form of patience
And each note sings her eternal story

She is music fashioned of hopes and fears
She is music to my deadening ears

[This message has been edited by PoeticKnight (edited 03-26-2001).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2001-03-26 04:52 PM


this is so pretty....I enjoyed SEA
inot2B
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2 posted 2001-03-26 05:06 PM


"She is music fashioned of hopes and fears
She is music to my deafening ears"

She is very lucky to have you there to hear her.

Tennessee Angel
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3 posted 2001-03-26 05:35 PM


Ah, this one is so sweet! I love it dear knight!
Sunshine
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4 posted 2001-03-26 05:39 PM


what carries music
the wind and wing of angel
is that what you hear?

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2001-03-26 05:51 PM


As if the wind through angels create her
Of bangles, golden harps and silver pipes,
One must be hallowed by God to hear her
=======================
With notes on measures delicate, yet strong
She can whisper a soft and slow cadence,
And rise in quickening notes of glory
Each chord a specific form of patience
And each note sings her eternal story

She is music fashioned of hopes and fears
She is music to my deadening ears
======================

and your imagery does the same for mine eyes
very cool and unique imagery here PK...
the ethereal and celestial visions make for lovely poetic harmony with the musical inspire of this.
this is a very nice moment of inspire poet sir.

oh you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
my body aches to breathe your breath
your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

Just A Woman
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6 posted 2001-03-26 06:08 PM


She sounds completely beautiful. Outstanding, PK. You're on today!

"Often the test of courage is not to die but to live"

~Vittorio Alferi~

PoeticKnight
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7 posted 2001-03-26 06:18 PM


Thanks SEA, inot2b, TA, Sun,Janet, and Just a Woman, as usual, you guys made me feel great.
snowpants
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8 posted 2001-03-26 06:25 PM


'She can whisper a soft and slow cadence,
And rise in quickening notes of glory
Each chord a specific form of patience
And each note sings her eternal story'

Beautiful write, PK! I love it!!

sp

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk into the room...

Martie
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9 posted 2001-03-26 06:28 PM


PK...If she is music and you the listening ear, then you are well matched...loved the idea of this and the way you made it happen.
Sven
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10 posted 2001-03-26 06:53 PM


never let it sound in a minor key. . .

excellent PK. . .

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Butterflies_dont_cry
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11 posted 2001-03-26 09:40 PM


So very cool PK...you
dear poet are as blue as a flame can get
when you write like this....when you
glow...we simply flutter Beautiful
writing~

[This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 03-26-2001).]

Dee
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12 posted 2001-03-27 12:29 PM


PK, this one cannot be ripped apart. It is beautiful! I am trying to learn to write these, I hope I can do it as well as you.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

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