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Mother_Earth
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0 posted 2001-03-26 04:10 PM



Still not asleep and it is one o'clock
Wanting to close the door on thought
The quiet, the darkness, the clock all mock
Another night when thoughts will haunt

Now it is past two and I want to escape
To the nether land of in-between awake and sleep
Relax, breath deeply, count sheep, my soul to take
I'm so tired, sleep won't come, darkness I seek

After three, no closer than before to sleep
Maybe if I try to stay awake it will work
Right now I'm much to tired to even weep
All the long night time, blessed sleep does lurk

Four, then five, the dawn is creeping in
Get up, open the shades, wait for the sun
Another night past, sleepless, day light did win
All signs of a new day appear one by one

Darkness comes again, I'm ready to see
The comfort of the bed, the quiet of night
As I ask and pray for the night to enfold me
To find sleep until the morning light

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1 posted 2001-03-26 04:14 PM


Oh my goodness! I sure know this one, and remember once baking a cake at 3:00 a.m. Great read, but sorry you are loosing sleep if you are.
Panne415
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2 posted 2001-03-26 04:17 PM


ME, Boy have I been there- not so comforting to know others suffer from insomnia too. I enjoyed reading your take on the subject of lack of sleep. Sorta like peeking in your b/r window instead of always looking out mine. Smiles, Panne
Panne415
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3 posted 2001-03-26 04:18 PM


ME, Boy have I been there- not so comforting to know others suffer from insomnia too. I enjoyed reading your take on the subject of lack of sleep. Sorta like peeking in your b/r window instead of always looking out mine. Smiles, Panne
Mother_Earth
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4 posted 2001-03-26 04:23 PM


Mysteria, I walk and eat during the night. I used to smoke alot, but quit so more time to eat! Thanks for understanding and wishing you sleep and rest. ME
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5 posted 2001-03-26 04:31 PM


Panne415, I have Restless Leg Syndrome and Periodic Limb Movement Syndrome. A lot of jerking and jumping of legs lots of nights. Hope restful nights for all my fellow non-sleepers. ME
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6 posted 2001-03-26 05:22 PM


I'm sorry to hear of the problems you have, which keep you awake at night. I do miss a night's sleep occasionally too, as I have Meniere's disease and the noise gets so loud in my ears, there is no way to block it out. Too bad we can't get together on those sleepless nights!

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7 posted 2001-03-26 06:57 PM


may the peace of sleep be yours tonight ME. . . and for all the non-sleepers. . .

excellent. . .

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8 posted 2001-03-26 07:04 PM


Sorry to hear of that condition. I imagine it gets pretty annoying. Geesh..as far as the staying up all night thing..I did that the other night. Sometimes I can't sleep for all the thoughts going through my mind that I want to write out. I enjoyed reading this.

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9 posted 2001-03-26 07:10 PM


MotherEarth~
Nicely done.
Me ? I love the solitude of the night, where thoughtful muses gather and sing poetry until the light of day.

Those pesky little sheep could be a problem though !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Mother_Earth
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10 posted 2001-03-26 08:42 PM


Trillium, sounds like the RLS is easier to take. It is quiet. I will think of you as I roam. Hugs

Sven, thank you, if not sleep, we can write poems.

Temptress, love your mind! you do great work even if it is in the middle of the night.

Marge, I confess that on good nights it is great to just sit, hear the quiet and solve lots of questions and problems. Thanks and hugs

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11 posted 2001-03-27 11:40 PM


Hmmm, a little bit of insomnia huh...maybe some sleeping pills will help(ha, ha)....great writing!

Nathan

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12 posted 2001-03-28 12:04 PM


Hey, Nate, 'ya got any extra?  Wish they could help.  Oh, well, maybe all that thrashing around will take a couple of pounds off!  thanks though
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13 posted 2001-03-29 11:35 AM


M.E.
you have written well what so many suffer from...
so sorry you know it so well..
my daughter suffers from both insomnia and RLS ..
she spends many a night on the puter helping  to fill the time and relax the mind.
Hugs to ya  

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14 posted 2001-03-29 11:52 AM


sheep 1
sheep 2
sheep 3
Oh not now,,, nice write,, i am here more than not...
Bernie
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Bernie Slicker

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15 posted 2001-03-29 12:56 PM


Vivid portrayal of your insomnia.  There was a bit on the news the other morn about how to induce sleep.  One of the things was to eat comfort foods, such as mashed potatoes, warm milk, or macaroni and cheese...but a caveat, make certain there's very little fat in them...so then where's the comfort come from?  Oh, they said that fat, just as spicy foods, can keep one awake.
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16 posted 2001-03-29 01:18 PM


Oh this happens to so many of us.  Not too often to me but last night when the clock struck one I arose, went to my computer, read some of the words there and was back to bed and asleep in minutes.  I don't need sheep.  Love, Joyce
Mother_Earth
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17 posted 2001-03-29 02:09 PM


JM, I know I have a lot of company! At the house, I can roam at night, but not in the 5th wheel.  Hugs to your daughter.  

bslicker, thanks for the smiles, they are always welcome.

VAS, I wonder who those foods are comforting. The hot milkis fine, but maybe a drop of rum?  Thanks

Joyce Johnson, like I said before, I used to walk outside and smoke, but I quit smoking so just sit and "jump" around.  Hugs

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