Missing You - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

0 posted 2001-03-26 03:40 PM

The autumn night is still and cold.
The moon is hiding now and then
Behind the clouds, but gleams like gold
Each time that it returns again.
I watch it and remember when
We were together, you and I.
Where have the years all gone since then?
I miss you more as time goes by.

In dreams your form I still enfold
And like a lion in his den,
I guard the secrets left untold
And hidden from the eyes of men.
They're buried in the deepest fen,
Where waters weep and curlews cry.
Not buyable for sou or sen.
I miss you more as time goes by.

I nestle like a winter wren,
Where my golden memories lie
And count the reasons, ten times ten,
I miss you more as time goes by!

Betty Lou Hebert

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-03-26 04:00 PM

Betty this is so pretty. It needs to be sent back to the top. Love, joyce

Panne415
Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 104
San Antonio

2 posted 2001-03-26 04:07 PM

Betty,
This is terrific. I really enjoyed this. Panne

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

3 posted 2001-03-26 05:16 PM

Joyce and Panne: Thanks both of you, for reading and commenting.

Betty Lou Hebert

tradewind
Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 101

4 posted 2001-03-27 12:15 PM

i don't think this one should be on the back pages, very lovely poem and beautiful wording

Katherine Chandler
Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 280
Florida, USA

5 posted 2001-03-27 12:48 PM

Absolutely lovely..

Kate

Blessings

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2001-03-27 02:32 PM

Tradewind and Katherine: Thank you both for your kind remarks.

Betty Lou Hebert

thecraig
Member

since 2001-03-11

Posts 223

7 posted 2001-03-27 07:21 PM

Every season is a corner. Poem caught me.

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

8 posted 2001-03-27 08:06 PM

gotta love it!!! and that's honest!!!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2001-03-27 08:09 PM

this really is amazing

SEA

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.