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Possum
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since 2001-03-20
Posts 23


0 posted 2001-03-26 10:20 AM



Be thankful my dear
That I left when I did
Stand in front of a mirror
And watch your body
See it as it should be seen
With much remorse and regret
And then look again
And see it as it would have been seen
Full of mutilated dreams

Be thankful
Put your hands together
Look up in the sky
And thank the Gods everyday
That I spared you
Beacause honey I honestly believe
In an eye for an eye

© Copyright 2001 Possum - All Rights Reserved
Cuddlez
Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362
1 posted 2001-03-26 01:15 PM


Ouch. Sounds like you hate this person and it was better for you to get out, no matter what you spared the other person.
Is some counseling in order? (Yes I do believe in eye for a eye in the case of rapists and murderers....)

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

Jill
Member
since 2001-02-02
Posts 62
Louisiana
2 posted 2001-03-26 01:19 PM


A BIG OUCH.....But I liked....Maybe in time you will be able to forgive this person.....but you will never forget.
Cerenity
Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
3 posted 2001-03-27 10:47 AM


Hi Possum,

Powerful words here,

Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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