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Whispers of the Heart
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Whispers of the Heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Inspired by Janet Marie Whispers of my Heart Within the ramparts of depart…I leave my heart and all it’s parts. In whispers of a hearts declare…my ghost and all that lives in there. Remember the early timber…not the last of my December Think of me in total toll…that loved you with my heart and soul You were my fire of desire…my angels and my choir The rivers of creative core…all of this and so much more. And though I did not tell you so…this very thing I would you know. That deep inside my very soul…you were my love and aim and goal. Forgive my mental veils and shrouds…my sailing off into the clouds. My searching for the golden fleece…my journey into war and peace. And though I went full circles sigh…there never was a where or why. For I have found within my fold…all the answers all the gold. You were in true my only treasure…my gold and silver and my pleasure. The dreams that lit my phantoms way…the sun and warmth of every day The wind that fluttered in my sail…the clear that cut the mist of veil. Stood the staging of my heart…forgave the rage of searching’s part. I looked afar for what was near…a foolish search it does appear. For in the end I came to know…that heaven lay in your bestow. And secrets of the universe…were nothing more then full reverse. And love is all the gold to weave…that will not turn to dust and leave. So thanks again the love you bore…May God grant you as much and more. This is the apples core naive …with humble thanks for love received. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
And secrets of the universe…were nothing more then full reverse. And love is all the gold to weave…that will not turn to dust and leave. words never seem to fail you...very beautiful..love the title too *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I am in awe of all the words you have written here. "Remember the early timber…not the last of my December Think of me in total toll…that loved you with my heart and soul" I love this it is just oh so.............. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is so proper that I have read this today... Thank you Sy, thank you Janet Marie... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OH MY ... OH SY!!! what an amazing way to begin my day... Sy-babes..you just paled the sunrise's beauty in compare to this... and that any part of this came from my poem makes me heart smile.. you took the premise of my sad little poem and lit it up with your gracious vision and wisdom encompassing a lifetime of lessons learned. Sy this is so lovely in its gift of spirit, heart and soul. You leave a legacy of wisdom and poetic grace amoung many other gifts.... dont ever doubt that. and to quote you now.... you've etched yourself on my sands of time. and I wish I had wrote THIS!! I could not pick fav lines like I usually do... they are all too special and should remain as one...... but one line in particular defines you ... "For I have found within my fold…all the answers all the gold." indeed you have sweet gentle poet...indeed.. and if we read enough of your poetry and inhale your wisdom... we just might as well. *winkiewinkie* love you Sy, me oh you speak to me in riddles |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Beautiful poem. I so enjoyed it. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nakd, Thank you and I do run out of words. *L* into2B, Thank you so much for the oh so. Sunshine, And thank you. *L* JM, You are the aurora of my poetry world. Love ya Winkiewinkie Stinky |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Trillium, Thank you, we must have crossed in my last answer. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
So very, very beautiful, Sy. Corinne |
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tradewind Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 101 |
i always enjoy reading beautiful poetry...such as this. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne, Thank you. *L* Tradewind, Thank you for the wonderful comment. |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Into my private library it goes! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*WOW* this is outstanding work, loved it very, very much. excellent as always. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sweet, You flatter me, thank you. Charisma, Thank you for the WOW. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ When 'inspiration' lifts you this high - I'm sure you sprouted wings ! Do you know how lovely this is ? I hope you do ... 'And though I went full circles sigh… there never was a where or why. For I have found within my fold… all the answers all the gold' You have to be very, very pleased with this beauty ... I know I am.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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wandering Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 92 |
Beatiful indeed...loved it |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Thank you love. *L* Wondering, Thank you for the read and comment. Vandana, Glad you enjoyed. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
beautiful poem-- enjoyed it greatly Jamie |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ah, Seymour... your heart whispered a beauty in this one! *S* I can't even pick a favorite line... for each and every one are pure excellence... Lovely!!! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Your internal rhyme is excellent! Kathleen Blake |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour~ this is gorgeous..... "You were my fire of desire…my angels and my choir The rivers of creative core…all of this and so much more. And though I did not tell you so…this very thing I would you know. That deep inside my very soul…you were my love and aim and goal" my goodness, so beautiful..... SEA. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jamie, Thank you so much. Suthern, Thank you love. *L* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Irish, Thank you for the excellent. Sea, THank you for the beautiful comment. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Seymour, my friend... A brilliant inspirational force, but my... what a beauty, you have rendered here... This is precious, to say the least... Regards, Sudhir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, You are my friend, thank you. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, This is one of the loveliest poems I have ever read or ever will, for in it more truth from the heart than I could ever write. Liz |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy--Reading this filled me up with something that caused goose bumps...and I don't know its name...wonder perhaps. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, My friend I thank you. |
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