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Pheromones |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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Pheromones Are they a blessing or a curse These pheromones I put in verse The scents that rouse our libidos A curse the way they come and go For true it seems we radiate Without intent alone no date Or for the wrong soul undisguised And we're approached quite surprised Ah but when they coincide Like a honeymoon with groom or bride Or when that jock became sincere A charged attraction becomes quite clear How best we deal when ours unleashed unbidden when we want them not attraction physical yet to one forbidden someone who's already tied the knot Worse yet we know we've loosed them in one we know is just bad news If we respond it won't end well leaving us crying the same old blues Pheromones a curse or blessing These chemicals just from your caressing I'm helpless under the spell you've cast if I couldn't smell my love still lasts The first duty of love is to listen. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
The reasons we are attracted to someone...you spell them out so perfectly...pheremones? Perhaps...LOL its as good a reason as any....but that last line? Thats a killer sir... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Pheromones spells romance, does it? Hummm...take away the logic and what do you have? Romantics.... LOL... well done, Mr. Yeats! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--Ah...chemestry is such an interesting subject...you know the kind I mean...You write of that magic attraction well. |
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Panne415 Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 104San Antonio |
Wil, I agree with Paula - that last line is a killer. Panne |
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duke Junior Member
since 2001-03-26
Posts 12 |
Astute |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
makes me think that I should read more chemistry. . .  excellent Sir. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
You are one wise man, an observer of life and love, enjoyed this very much! Corinne |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Where but a place like this would you find a guy doing a Pheromone poem? Love it, Wil! Hmmmmm, maybe I should try one about testosterone . . . whataya think? |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
They're a blessing - They've gotta be... Where ever would we be without love and lust, my friend?...  Nice job here..  |
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Isabella Junior Member
since 2001-03-22
Posts 16Confusion |
I agree with Nan, both love and lust-in bunches! Belle |
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