Somewhere In Time.............

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SEA

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0 posted 2001-03-26 12:12 PM

I was lost………………….somewhere in time
Lost in shadows of memories ………………..and rhyme…………
You were there ……………….walking with me
Touching my heart………………..silently

You knew of my weakness…….my need for peace
Yet you would offer me………no release
You kept toying with…………..and touching my soul
As memories flowed………….taking their toll

Yesterday meshed…….and melted within
Reminding me over………….and over again
And still I reached out……….pushed play to re-hear
The melody of memory………………….. keeping you near

~SEA~

Mike
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1 posted 2001-03-26 12:18 PM

very nice... enjoyed much.

Marge Tindal

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2 posted 2001-03-26 12:31 PM

SEA~
Girl, you just played my song ...
Not to mention having the title to one of my favorite movies ! !

Yeppers, just keep pushing that re-play button.
Are we great on memory-keeping or what ?
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

SEA

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3 posted 2001-03-26 12:35 PM

Mike~ thank you

Marge~ yes, some how I think we are exactly the same when it comes to our memories.....and favorite movies!! I "borrowed" that title......LOVE that movie.....thank you

~SEA

Temptress

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4 posted 2001-03-26 12:37 PM

Beautifully done if I must say so...and I must of course.

SEA

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5 posted 2001-03-26 12:40 PM

Temptress~

thank you for saying so

SEA

PoeticKnight
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6 posted 2001-03-26 09:13 AM

Such good ryme and flow, the way its laid out and presented. Another good one SEA.

Sunshine

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7 posted 2001-03-26 10:05 AM

One of my favorite movies....now the theme song will run rampant in my mind all day....

thank you for this keeper...

Sven

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8 posted 2001-03-26 07:19 PM

quote:
the melody of memory. . .

I loved that line. . .

wonderful. . .

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SEA

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9 posted 2001-03-26 08:36 PM

PK~ thank you so much...you always have something nice to say

Sunshine~ I ordered that DVD ( of the movie Somewhere In Time) through Columbia House.....I can't wait to get it!!

thank you

Sven~ I'm glad you liked that part

~SEA

Mysteria

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10 posted 2001-03-27 03:52 AM

Loved the movie, but I think I loved your poem more! Just great stuff, and what memories are really made of. I so enjoyed this, thank you.

Nan

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11 posted 2001-03-27 07:28 AM

I loved the movie as well... and I have to say, I totally enjoyed reading this gem as well...

SEA

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12 posted 2001-03-27 08:50 AM

Mysteria and Nan

I think there is something with that movie.....so romantic.....sigh....

that you both so much....I'm happy you liked this

SEA

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