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Daniel J D
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0 posted 2001-03-25 11:06 PM


Deep Within Me!

Deep within me.....
Rests a soul with a pounding heart
Lies the memories of love's forgotten art
Resides treasures of dreams only paradise gives
Persists the need to see soaring butterflies
Echoes violins, harps, and the sounds of canaries
Is a childhood of innocence wanting.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

© Copyright 2001 Daniel J D Ringuet - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-03-25 11:54 PM


ohhh DJD....I love this SEA
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2 posted 2001-03-26 08:39 PM


where it should always begin. . .

excellent. . .

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JLR
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3 posted 2001-03-26 09:00 PM


'persists the need...'

to read in hope...enjoyed!

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4 posted 2001-03-26 09:36 PM


This was very enjoyable. Thank you for the
peek Deep Within You

Irish Rose
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5 posted 2001-03-26 09:42 PM


It's lovely, Daniel, and the last line everyone should have.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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6 posted 2001-03-26 09:49 PM


The desire for purity of heart (and art) makes for lovely reading. Thank you.

Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


Paula Finn
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7 posted 2001-03-27 12:36 PM


You are just wonderful my sweet friend
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8 posted 2001-04-01 12:36 PM


you are so right......love it.

Charisma

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