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I love you evermore... (little tweeking of an oldie)
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I love you evermore... (little tweeking of an oldie) |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
It was a fleeting second, within time’s shifting sand, When we first as lovers met, when first I took your hand, You were but a fantasy, a vision in my mind, When I commenced my journey, not knowing what I’d find, In you I saw an angel, enraptured by your charms, I slowly walked towards you, I took you in my arms, I’d never seen such beauty, nor touched such loveliness, I longed to taste your velvet lips, to feel your soft caress, I sought your sensual treasures, sweet wine of goddess kiss, In light of Luna’s golden glow, consumed in passion’s bliss, It was a fleeting second, when found what Byron meant, “She walks in beauty like the night,” I was to heaven sent, I was but a prisoner, begging to be free, Within love’s fleeting second, was freed eternally. I held you close within my arms, I felt your warm embrace, As from above, the welkin lights, shown down upon your face, I awoke to all my dreams, within your beauty there, As I looked upon your face, as stroked your silken hair, I heard sweet music of the muse, we danced throughout the night, Free as the summer winds that blow, as one we did unite, I felt the splendor of your soul, as heard your siren’s song, Breathing in your fragrant scent, I captured all I long, For time stood still, my Venus fair, whil’st held you in my arms, The moon itself, in sky above, bowed to your beauteous charms, My eyes drank of your loveliness, soft grace of supple limb, Fair creature of the welkin blue, angelic seraphim, I kissed the smoothness of your skin, as gazed into your eyes, With soft caress, on feathered wings, I floated on night’s skies. The morning star, you were the night, we danced ‘cross heaven’s floor, Upon the clouds on winds of time, my darling Terpsichore, I sang to you love’s madrigal, I’ll love you evermore, I whispered softly to the wind, I love you evermore. [This message has been edited by Mike (edited 03-25-2001).] |
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tradewind Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 101 |
awww...how romantic! beautifully written and wonderful words to read |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mike....please....don't tweak any more....'tis fine as is, Sir...more than fine... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Oh Mike...this is beautiful...JM told me that you had been doing some tweeking...I'm so glad to see that you tweeked it to your liking...this is just fantastic!! The visions that played out in this...the meeting...the expectations...and then finding what had been longed for...and so much more...the imagery is superb and your internal rhyme and cadence...ahhhhhh you write the poems that most only dream to write...amazing work Mike...simply amazing~ |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I must concur with Butterflies' "amazing." This is beautiful, my friend. Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mike--It was and is still beautiful! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Tradewind... thank you for the kind and gracious comment. Sunshine... yep.. done tweeking, glad you liked... Butterflies... *smile* glad you enjoyed, and flattery will get you everywhere... lol Claire... thank you much my poetic friend... hope you are feeling well today... Martie... and how is my favorite flower poet doing? *smile* thanks for reading and responding Martie... |
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