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AliciaRose
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0 posted 2001-03-25 05:36 PM


I am a snow woman
on a cold day.
I'd rather
drink hot chocolate
in winter.
I wear mittens
to keep my hands warm
in winter.
I'd rather go sledding
when it snows.
It's best when school
is delayed.
Winter is
my favorite season.

I like the snow.
I am a snow woman

[This message has been edited by AliciaRose (edited 03-25-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 AliciaRose - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2001-03-25 05:39 PM


Me too! This is excellent! SEA
Nan
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2 posted 2001-03-25 05:54 PM


Hi Alicia - How are you, sweetie???
This poem is pretty
... Like winter...

Nice to see you writing again.. Let's see some more???

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-03-25 05:56 PM


AliciaRose~
You take the snow ....
I'll take the hot chocolate !
Mmmmmmm ! With LOTS of marshmallows ! !
Meet ya' in the middle !

This is WONDERFUL, young lady !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Sunshine
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4 posted 2001-03-25 05:59 PM


Give me a quilt, and I'll watch you through the windows! I'm ready for some warm!


SpitFire
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5 posted 2001-03-25 06:00 PM


~This is excellent! Guess what,...my name's Alicia too, AND, I like the snow. (lots). . Great work! Fun Read. *Peace.
Poet deVine
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6 posted 2001-03-25 06:05 PM



I guess someone has to like snow - so I'm glad you do. But I like soft warm spring breezes!!!!

JLR
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7 posted 2001-03-25 06:10 PM


I'm with Marge, you can have all my snow, sweetie and build a whole snow family! Very good poem and nice to meet you!
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8 posted 2001-03-25 07:14 PM


I say, let's go out and build some snow people!!!

wonderful!!!

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Dee
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9 posted 2001-03-25 07:21 PM


Your poem is wonderful, Alicia. I love the snow too. Can I come out and build snow men with you.
Doreen, it's good to see the talent has been passed on.

Dee

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desperado
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10 posted 2001-03-25 08:09 PM


hey alicia! It's me, James. Nice to see you writing again. greetings from korea! tell ya what, ask you mom to email me your address and I'll send a postcard to you, and your mom. wonderful piece though, I love the snow too. perhaps someday we can make some snow people and have some fun. sound good? Keep writing so I can keep reading.

People demand freedom of speech to make up for the freedom of thought which they avoid. --Soren Kierkegaard

Honeybee
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11 posted 2001-03-25 08:30 PM


AliciaRose~(what a pretty name)

It's so good to see an eight year old who loves wintertime and poetry! I love hot chocolate with great big marshmellows too! I am sure that your mom is very proud of your talent! Keep up the good work, and do share more poems with us~

"it's best when school
is delayed"
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When I was your age, I lived for that but, don't tell your Mom that okay?!

Take care,
Melissa~

doreen peri
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12 posted 2001-03-25 09:34 PM


beautiful, baby!!!!! iLOVE you..... keep writing your awesome beautiful verse.... and painting and drawing those beautiful pictures....

goodnight, baby... sleeptight... sweet dreams... god bless you.... see you tomorrow... ioveyou

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