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poertyman2002
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 32
Florida, US

0 posted 2001-03-25 04:12 PM


Thinking about times,
Thinking about crimes,
Thinking about people,
Who do not know how to ryhme.
Times and crimes and even rhymes,
Can be hurtful or helpful sometimes.
A crimE that steels your heart back,
From one who did not deserve.
A time that you remember,
For being so superb.
And hopefully when you are done with this,
This ryhme will help you much.
Poetry is amazing.
Do you believe in such?

Poetry is sweet. Sweeter than sugar? Yes, Sweeter than me, maybe.

© Copyright 2001 Brian Gold - All Rights Reserved
monique
Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369
Louisiana
1 posted 2001-03-25 04:58 PM


What a coincidence
i haven't been at Passions in awhile
so much is happening
and today i have stolen a few minutes from the things i am suppose to be doing
and the poem that cut my eyes is yours
because a friend of mine is in jail
i write him a lot and i was trying to rhyme
hoping to get him to rhyme his feeling
because i know it does feel better to write it all out and let others read your life on paper
a transfer of ourselves to one another on paper
which come from the tree of knowledge
cut for us to read about the blood of Jesus
or the blood of Dracula

monique

[This message has been edited by monique (edited 03-25-2001).]

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