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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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My dreams are not but dreams to be, They are my life, reality. I dressed myself for None to see, Blindly, No One came to me. I walked along the marbled floors, Counting squares that led before. I circled once and once again, Wandering questions, Why and When? My dreams are not but dreams to be, They are my life, reality. I dressed myself for None to see, Blindly, No One came to me. I miss the times of yesterday, The softened kiss that came my way. The oftened look of interest seen, Why does it now, seem like a dream? But dreams are not but dreams to be, They are my day's, reality. They stretch beyond the indigo, I question, has it lost it's glow? The moon, it's glean, it's treasured hold, In dark of night, once bright and bold, Has waned a bit, and with it takes A piece of hope, exchanged in aches. My dreams are not but dreams to be, They are my life, reality. I dressed myself for None to see, Blindly, No One came to me. To brush his hand across my brow To see my hazel eyes of now. The tears for No One trickling down Behind the lips, a smiling frown Unveiling, disappointments, more or less of yearnings to explore. I dressed myself for None to see, Blindly, No One came to me. My dreams are not but dreams to me, They are my life, reality. ~Wynter/Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 03-25-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I loved the imagery in this, very specific and drew me in. Kathleen Blake |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Wynter - so softly you write, and a beautiful writing. Your thoughts are in your words, just touching. BC |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Wynter, beautiful words and images. I really enjoyed My dreams are not but dreams to be, They are my life, reality. Behind the lips, a smiling frown Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Kathleen I was thinking of what it's like sitting and waiting and watching for that special someone and he doesn't show in your life...  BC I am always so grateful when you stop by and respond...perks me right up Bill huggzzz Dee thank you, just one of those mellow moments I guess...but the day developed fine, I ended up with a poem from it...  ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
My dreams are not but dreams to be, They are my life, reality. I dressed myself for None to see, Blindly, No One came to me. Awesome lines placed nicley throughout. I can't believe no one came to you .....*L* |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
PK...you can believe me, I am most honest ..I cannot tell a lie...well almost always can't ever...hmm am beginning to confuse myself this morning..*s thank you for your kind responses ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
PK...you can believe me, I am most honest ..I cannot tell a lie...well almost always can't ever...hmm am beginning to confuse myself this morning..*s thank you for your kind responses ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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