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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Scented heat surrounds My fingers long to linger 'Neath the waters depth |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
hhmmmm . . . is this in the right forum? Oh, your doing the dishes late . . . well, jeez, a guy can get ideas at this hour . . . |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Hmm..  I like it. You can think of it in a couple of different ways. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
 Yep, me likes, this could be open to interpretation, very though-provoking, also, very hot!~Take care, Melissa~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Oh yeah ... this is a very cool Senryu ... well ... actually its a very HOT senryu ..  either way ... youre working those syllables girlie ... LOL very well done Paula ... impact made for sure!!! (LOL @ Krawdads reply.) oh you speak to me in riddles |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Lordy!....how you captured soooooo many thoughts in such a few amount of words....great job Paula~ |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
And lingers, and lingers, and lingers... upon the thoughts of in the waters.... Bernie A a day keeps the world 'GBernie Slicker |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Fingers are nice but I'm jumping in. Calgon take me away!!!!!!!!! |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
WOW! This one is very, very, subject to interpretation. I think it suggests there are times when "self-help" is an appropriate prescription and/or temptation, I guess it depends on the reader? Peace. "The poet is the priest of the invisible." |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Paula....this is so......and yet it's.........and then.........wow! Fantastic my dear SEA |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Krawdad...dishes? OH YEAH dishes yeah right uh huh...and I thought guys could get THOUGHTS at any hour LOL...thanks Temptress...yes you can and thats the fun of it...go where your mind takes you...thanks Melissa...glad you like it...and if it made you think its a good one then...thank you Hey Janet girl...welllllll I gotta admit I had some inspiration here...but I aint telling...thanks my friend...and yeah...he(Krawdad)is kinda cute huh? Holly...LOL you like huh girlie? Now just whats going thru that mind of yours? HEHEHE Bernie...linger as long as you'd like...we can always warm the water again... inot2B...wellllll let me move over a little first LOL...bubbles galore coyote...totally up to the reader...and thats the fun of it...thank you Sea...ohLOL girl...you are the fantastic one...this reply just has me grinning...thanks |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
this one 'smokes' and under water - a darned good trick ~S~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
God I hope you don't lose a finger! But I can understand why you'd linger...at least I think I can...aw maybe I'm looking in the wrong water......thought provoking write Paula! |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
You can linger in my water anytime. Wonderfully wicked thought you have provoked. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Bill...lol...well water boils right? Thanks ethome...LOL are you peeking? Well hop right in and find out for yourself... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
very original, Paula |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Alan...you sneaked in on me...well move over let me slip on in...heheheh |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Lost me...what else is new? But I was here and read. Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ah, those hot tubs can be so much fun. Can I bring my snorkel? |
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