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Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

0 posted 2001-03-24 06:55 PM

~~ Love Me Or Let Me Free ~~

I swing in the garden’s gentle breeze,
In the light of a full moon.
Under a tiara of stars,
I am the purest of truth and body.
A kindred spirit needing
To be awakened to love.
~*~ Come closer ~*~
Take my hand, hold it.
With it,
I give myself to you.
~*~ Be gentle ~*~
I offer you my heart.
Will your heart swing with me?
A metronome of love awaits us.
I want to give myself to you.
Look carefully into my soul,
For a heart of truth and,
loves lies there.
Gently take me,
Explore, feel, smell,
Taste my essence.
Enter my body and,
Explore me, experience me,
Let me explore you.
I have nothing to hide.
No hidden secrets, no shame.
Know me, love me,
But only if you can,
Promise me this,
~*~ Love me ~*~,
For who and what I am.
If not,
~*~ set me free ~*~

Art: ~* Reveries *~ (1913)
By: Maxfield Parrish (1870-1966)

~*~ Mysteria ~*~
© Copyright 2001
All Rights Reserved

~*~A poet is someone who reads more than they write ~*~

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 03-24-2001).]

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2001-03-24 07:01 PM

"Under a tiara of stars
I am the purest of truth and body
a kindred spirit needing
to be awakened to love

Will your heart swing with me?
A metronome of love awaits us

Love me
for who and what I am
if not
set me free"
==========================

Beautiful, wonderful imagery and phrasing!! Most women desire this, and should accept no less!

Take care,
Melissa~

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-03-24 07:05 PM

Mysteria....you are outdoing yourself, and the rest of us.....

well done my friend....

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-03-24 08:26 PM

I swing in the garden’s gentle breeze,
In the light of a full moon.
Under a tiara of stars,
I am the purest of truth and body.
A kindred spirit needing
To be awakened to love.
============================

beautiful imagery laced emotions Mysteria ..
and served up with your wonderful presentation of art and music.
passionate expressions here...well done.

oh you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
my body aches to breathe your breath
your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

4 posted 2001-03-24 09:15 PM

Amen! Enjoyed the message and way of this. If I wasn't so tired of whining...I might have said more. Not really...that is just so funny.

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2001-03-24 09:54 PM

Mysteria, I knew from the beginning you were a swinger!

This poem really says it all. I think that's what all of us really want...just to be loved for what and who we are. You express that in a beautiful way.....

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2001-03-24 10:31 PM

Melissa ~*~ I agree, but it works both ways, anyone who actually believes they can change someone is dreaming! Thank you.

Sunshine ~*~ You are too kind and sure know how to "poof me fedders" however, I am just getting the hang of this writing business, so I thank you.

Janet Marie ~*~ I have equal passions for art and the written words, so I like combining them, and I thank you for your kind acceptance.

JLR ~*~ Now you are the funny one, and I detect some tongue in cheek there, buy a blank sign, and put on it "No whining allowed", let me know how you do -

Balladeer ~*~ So nice to see you read something I did, and like too - what a bonus! Yep ~ I am afraid I am a swinger, and by the way I forced the first line to make it all tie together, naughty.

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 03-24-2001).]

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2001-03-25 01:22 AM

Beautifully written Mysteria, and the image compliments your words so perfectly! Lovely flow, with such tender and delicate sentiments. I very much enjoyed this wonderful render!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

8 posted 2001-03-25 02:15 AM

Kit: Thank you - actually I stare at a work of art, and try to figure out what the character or item is thinking and go from there, but I do thank you for the compliment, but it is the art that makes me look decent! Thanks for reading.

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

9 posted 2001-06-05 09:42 AM

i agree with your poem wholeheartedly,Love me as i am or set me free,this is true and
enjoyable

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