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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2001-03-24 03:17 AM


We should be dancing
Drifting on the summer breeze
Hearts beating as one

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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-03-24 04:53 AM


I like this, short and sweet!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-03-24 05:08 AM


Ah romancing and dancing...James
Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-03-24 05:13 AM


So Paula...why aren't we?

well done!

snowpants
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4 posted 2001-03-24 09:50 AM


Nicely done, as usual, Paula! I like this!

sp

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk into the room...

Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2001-03-24 09:53 AM


Oh, it sounds like a lovely idea Paula! Nicely written, loved the thoughts!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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6 posted 2001-03-24 10:38 AM


Dancing, with the gulf breeze, here...
opps it's still cold up there, ok the summer breeze...
no better yet,
We should be dancing
Drifting on the summer breeze
..and......

Bernie

A a day keeps the world 'G

Bernie Slicker

JLR
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7 posted 2001-03-24 10:58 AM


Reminds me of the BeeGees 'We should be dancin...yyyeeaaahhh'! Ha! Hate disco. Love you and your words, however short. And yes, you should be...dancing. Shouldn't we all?
Paula Finn
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8 posted 2001-03-25 01:16 AM


Kathleen...LOL its seems to be the only way I can write lately...thanks

James...simple pleasure yes? HUGS

Karilea...no dance partner I guess...lol...thanks

sp...you flatter me...thanks

Kit...I love to dance out under the sky...thank you

Bernie...and? and? cmon now you cant leave me hanging like this...

JLR...yes we should..to the sweetest melody...thanks darlin girl

ethome
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9 posted 2001-04-12 07:02 PM


We should be floating on a summer breeze and drinking lemonade and laughing at the sun the moon and the stars and talking about the special times, times that last forever throughout the good and the bad....times etched in the pages of the mind with images so real to recall and drift away into the oblivion of happiness. Those times when life's special waters are crystal clear and fresh for the drinking! Ah those times....see what you've done here now! You just got me going!  Good writing Paula!
Paula Finn
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10 posted 2001-04-14 04:30 AM


ethome...but sweet poet...I adore it when you go on and on...and to know I can touch you like this? Just makes my day...thank you sweetheart
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