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Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-03-24 02:33 AM

Tears I Want To Cry

Endless nights and lonesome dreams
Entrenched memories lost in darkness' gleams
Endless days and lonesome walks
Entwined happiness lost within solitude's stalks

Tears I want to cry are real
Tears of love running wild out of control
Tears of a heart deeply hurt and wounded
Tears seeking warmth long ago dispersed

How should I come to love's path
How can I regain my senses in the aftermath
How must I hide the lost dreams of passion
How can I stop the tears without compassion

Tears I want to cry are morning's dew
Tears of a heart and soul asking for you
Tears I must cry to understand true emotion
Tears needing your soft hands to bring back reason

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2001-03-24 02:37 AM

Cry the tears, for if you ever teach yourself not to, then you may never be able to again. I love this and know it well. Nice writing.

Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

2 posted 2001-03-24 03:01 AM

Daniel, this is beautiful. Hugs for you.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

3 posted 2001-03-24 03:07 AM

You ok darlin? Email me...this is so heartfelt Daniel...HUGS!!!!!

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-03-24 03:15 AM

It is profoundly beautiful, Daniel.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

5 posted 2001-03-24 03:29 AM

Temptress, Dee, Paula, and Kathleen,
I am fine, just the poet giving some hope to those lost out of love.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-03-25 05:02 PM

JD~
Enjoyed the format - and the thoughts.

'How should I come to love's path' ?

I think the answer would be,
with open heart .... seeking.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

7 posted 2001-03-25 05:12 PM

Third verse really got me...and the last line. I like this a lot.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-03-25 06:41 PM

there will always be hope my friend. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

9 posted 2001-03-25 07:44 PM

Marge, JLR, and Sven,
Thank you for your meaningful replies. Tears need to be shed to understand love.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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