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Lost in You (WhtDove's Nature Challenge)
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Lost in You (WhtDove's Nature Challenge) |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Perhaps this isn't quite what was intended for the challenge, but, this is definitely a beautiful place to which I've been and can describe quite precisely...   a shadow shed on the side of the mountain... the clouds overcast now rendered vulnerable... the colors of the rainbow no longer a blend... walls of stone fast made moldable... rivers now flowing from south to north... the break of dawn enduring the entire day... the radiance of your sun from within shining forth... your love through whispers of wind here to stay... time standing still, stepping aside for quietude... loneliness taking its place, making way for companionship... promises singing aloud, illuminating the pacified mood... uncertainty banished from sight, clearing the air for passion’s trip... delicate rhymes hinting of your delight... long-sought-after peace of mind in my possession... absolutely no end to this tranquility in sight... simply grasping the rest of our lives--without question. -kh 03/24/01 to be with you... I've tried to hide my passion, but it's just no use... piece by piece I lose it when you walk into the room... [This message has been edited by snowpants (edited 03-24-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It sure works for me, and why didn't I know about this challenge, I love nature!!!!!1 ummm better write something! Kathleen Blake |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the clouds overcast now rendered vulnerable... the colors of the rainbow no longer a blend... the break of dawn enduring the entire day... your love through whispers of wind here to stay... time standing still, stepping aside for quietude... ===================== delicate rhymes hinting of your delight... long-sought-after peace of mind in my possession... absolutely no end to this tranquility in sight... simply grasping the rest of our lives--without question. ===================== and now we have been there too  well done poetess ...and in rhyme divine with some excellent poetic phrases and images. cool writing SP!!  oh you speak to me in riddles |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I can picture the rainbow, thanks snowpants, I needed that. I went from  to A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Kathleen: thanks! yes, nature is a great thing to write about! glad you liked this! JM: yes, and what a wonderful place to be...thank you much, m'friend! I'm glad you enjoyed this one!  walker: why, I am glad I could brighten your day...thank you for your wonderful reply!  sp  to be with you... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully descriptive Snowpants ... a visual delight through both words and accompanying graphic, just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Thanks, Kit!! I am glad you enjoyed this!! And, I am glad I could do justice to such a beautiful place, too!! sp to be with you... |
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