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He Dries Her Off...the Shower

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Auguste
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He Dries Her Off


She steps from the bath,
water
running in rivulets
down
her fragrant body,
invading secret places,
then quietly
dripping
onto the
drenched mat.

He comes to dry her off,
starting by wrapping a towel
around her hair
and then taking another
as he tenderly
kisses her,
pulling her wetness
against him.

He gently
pats her back,
moving ever downward
against
supple rises and curves
as he dries
all
of the places
that have
collected moisture.

Then on his knees,
he dries each leg,
starting
at the thighs
and finishes
with her feet.

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

© Copyright 2001 Michael Auguste - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 03-23-2001 10:49 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

MichaelA~
Sizzling !
Sensual !
Softly inviting !
~*Marge*~


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Hi Michael--very lovingly toweled poem, my friend...well done!
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*sigh*.....is there any other way....done
with just the right touch of tender and
steam...excellent writing~
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4 posted 03-24-2001 01:56 AM       View Profile for Auguste   Email Auguste   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Auguste's Home Page   View IP for Auguste

Marge,
I'm so glad you got to read this one. As you can see, it's a bit different from my usual writing. It's more sensual. Hey, do me a favor and drop the "A" on Michael A. We've known each other for so long now that the "A" isn't needed, don't you think? :-) I am glad you liked this one, my friend and appreciate you stopping by for a read. Thank you.

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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Martie,
Is there any other way? Thank you.

Butterflies,
Thank you for the "excellent."


Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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Michael--Don't mind me as I come back to read this little gem again..
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...and I'll bet the towel had been warmed, too....

this is liking me....
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Very nice

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.

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Michael, I'm glad you pointed me to this one. It's very beautiful and sensual. I like the loving images you have created with it.


Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

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Karilea,
Yes, the towel was also warm. :-) Thanks

Moon Dust,
Thanks for the "very nice" and for reading.

Dee,
I was hoping the love showed through as much as the sensual quality. Thanks for noticing it and for the nice words, my friend. ((((hugs))))


Michael

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"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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If my husband toweled me off like this, I would be completely undone.........this is so sensual and yes, so loving and gentle and romantic................sigh........ SEA
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Such a tender sensual moment. Why don't men do this more??????

Loved it, Auguste. Beautiful gentle flow.

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Very sensuous and romantic writing, Auguste. A beautiful moment indeed.

LW

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Michael,
What a sensual piece of writing you have done, very seductive and beautifully written. Thank you.....Sue

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SEA,

Completely undone?  Ouch, sounds painful.     Seriously, glad you liked this one and thank you.


Just A Woman,

They don't do it more?  Hmmm...     Then maybe they just ought to.  Thank you.


Lone Wolf,

Thank for for the kind words and for stopping in to read this.  


Sue,

I appreciate you reading this and the nice comments.  Thank you.  


Michael


Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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Ohhhhhh.... lovely!!! A man with such sensuality in his soul is a keeper indeed! *S*
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All I can say is this is the most sensual poem I've read in ages.

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Mmmmmm....very nice...delicious in fact!

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very nice, and sensual.
Red  
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I have to go see my wife now....
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This is so romantic, I am speechless.
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suthern,
Does that mean you're keeping me?  :-)  Thanks for reading and enjoying.

Kathleen,
The most?  Hmmm...  Guess I'll just have to write another to top this one.  :-)  Thank you.

Elizabeth,
Thanks for the "delicious."  :-)

Red-uni,
Glad you liked it and thanks. :-)

JamesBowie,
(Laughing)  I bet she'll be happy to see you.  Thanks.  :-)

Rosebud,
Speechless?  
Does that mean I went too far with this one?  :-)  Thank you for liking this.


Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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Clearly you're a man - I will be taking more writing lessons from - - Well done my friend - very well done
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Wilfred,

I'm flattered, sir.  Thank you, sincerely.  I'm pleased you liked this piece.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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