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Dee
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0 posted 2001-03-23 05:21 PM


Instead.

I love a man in uniform,
he can really turn my head,
but give me one in tight blue jeans
and cowboy boots instead.
One who knows what works about,
who can mix it with the best,
and knows how to play the game
when he’s put to the test.
He’d have to love the country
and the music it can inspire.
Party hard all night long
and never seem to tire.
Some one who can be tender
or tough when the need is there
Not too much to ask for,
just the best that’s here.


I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

© Copyright 2001 Dee Manders - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-03-23 05:28 PM


Dee~ oh yea, blue jeans and cowboy boots this is great! SEA
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2 posted 2001-03-23 05:32 PM


Hi Sea. Thanks. (It seems while I was visiting your For Parker's Lace you were here.) There's just something about a cowboy that's...well you know.



Dee

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Gawd yes, I do know.........*sigh* SEA
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4 posted 2001-03-23 05:45 PM


Hey Dee, Cowboys huh? All you need is a construction worker, a cop, a biker, and an indian and you've got Village People. Just kidding. Looking forward to more of yours.
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5 posted 2001-03-23 06:02 PM


Village People!! No thanks PK, I think I'll just stick to cowboys! Thanks for reading.

Dee

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6 posted 2001-03-23 09:43 PM


ROFLMAO at PK's village people joke

Dee this is way cute and way cool ...
fun poem with perfect rhyme...
and all I have to add is...
the only thing better than a cowboy...
is....
A ROCK STAR IN A COWBOY HAT!!!!!!
OH baby............

oh you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
my body aches to breathe your breath
your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

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7 posted 2001-03-23 09:50 PM


Even I would have to agree with JM...the only thing better. Nice write.
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8 posted 2001-03-23 10:47 PM


Ah, you've just described the man of my dreams..If you find one, could you see if he has a brother for me.
Dee
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9 posted 2001-03-24 12:31 PM


Janet and JLR, as long as it's not one of the village people that's ok.

Tennessee Angel, I live in a town full of them! When can I expect your visit?

Thanks for reading.

Dee

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10 posted 2001-03-24 01:28 AM


Hi Dee,

I look pretty good in tight jeans, but can't stand those pointed boots and as for partying, I've done my time already. Guess you'll have to look elsewhere, darn it! :-) It's good to see you back here posting again, dear friend. I loved this. Good work! Thanks for sharing.

Michael

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Dee
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11 posted 2001-03-24 02:15 AM


Hey Michael, you can join me for a dance anytime!

Dee

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12 posted 2001-03-25 02:43 PM


Fun! I liked reading this one...hope you find your "ideal man!"
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13 posted 2001-03-25 03:46 PM


Hi Dee,

I'll take you up on that dance, or maybe two.
:-)

Michael

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14 posted 2001-03-25 05:19 PM


Elizabeth, I have found my ideal man, he just won't wear the cowboy gear! yet!

Michael, I'd be delighted, and I will remember when I eventually get over there.

Dee


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[This message has been edited by Dee (edited 03-25-2001).]

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15 posted 2001-03-27 11:50 AM


Yeeeeeeeeee-Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! LOL. I needed this little picker-upper this morning, Dee... Now just where IS that vision of scrumptiousness? LOL
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16 posted 2001-03-27 03:29 PM


Suthern, I live in a town full of them. Come and take your pick!  

Dee

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17 posted 2001-05-02 12:40 PM


LOL
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18 posted 2001-05-02 05:00 PM


I'm still waiting for that dance, my sweet friend.  

(((hugs)))
Michael

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19 posted 2001-05-02 05:11 PM


This is just as charming as all the comments!  Very cute!
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20 posted 2001-05-02 05:47 PM


thanks for bringing this back up guys. Glad you liked it.

Dee

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