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For Parker's "Lace" |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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I felt your fingertips trace my curves slowly with a patience I'm not capable of your kisses so soft finding each freckle on my face shoulders....... and below drawing out my breath in sighs in gasps in desperation for more............. your mouth at my ear telling me just how much you like the lace that I chose for tonight your hands possess me slowly gently taking me to new heights then............. without warning the poem ends. ~SEA~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
WITHOUT WARNING?  I HATE WHEN THAT HAPPENS!!!! rofl....very nice, SEA.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
HEY....it's WAY too early for all this mushy stuff..... whew.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You better be careful Sea because Parker has an affection for lace and he might request a continuation of this poem...James |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Nicely done Sea, you could finish it in Adult you know.  Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
hehehehehehe....I'd like a continuance of this also. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I felt your fingertips trace my curves slowly ***with a patience I'm not capable of*** ========================== ***I LOVE that line!! this is a sensual and perfect poetic inspire from P-mans poem.. very cool Sea-gator! me thinks its Flirt Friday....LOL we seem to all be wound up today... (me thinks "someone" put raspberry tea in the punchbowl in the PIP lounge) TEEHEE  I'll bet it was serenity ROFL ya know we girlies aint gotta chance with Parker & PK steaming our screens with lace and afterglow.... ahhh but us moths....we're in heaven *L*oh you speak to me in riddles |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ You enticing little imp you !  Just loving your lace-chase ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sorry, have to be a tease in this case.........Parker led the waywith his hot little tease yea, Janet.....  that tea works good hot or cold..........try it over ice sometime Marge~ thank you ~SEA |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'I felt your fingertips trace my curves slowly with a patience I'm not capable of' Yep...my favorite lines, too! Lovin' this poem and the 'ending!' sp  to be with you... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
HEHEHEHE...such a tease you are girlie |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
SEA, well I kind of like the thought of searching for those hiden freckles. You are a bigger tease then me, and dangerous... what time does the hubby go to work. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I really like this. A very soft sensual touch. Poetry is a lot like this piece describes. A good piece will leaving you wanting more at its climax as this has done. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
This reminds me that Lace recited will be delayed due to tecnical difficulties of my sound software. So I'll have to tease you later. |
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