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0 posted 2001-03-23 09:13 AM



* I tried to get everyone.....it's hard, there are so many now....if you don't see your name, please add a verse and put yourself at the party!!*

Girls Night Out


I decided that I needed
A girls night out
Called up Janet
And gave her a shout

Round up the ladies
It's time we had some fun
I want to dance and drink
Now that work is done

Marge was the next
That I had to call
Come out and party with us
We're gonna have a ball!

Janet rounded up BDC
Serenity, Paula, and Kit
They were ready to go
Girl's night out will be a hit!

I made so many calls
I hope my directions were clear
We were to meet at the bar
Named after Balladeer!


Once I arrived
So many faces I did see
There's Suthern, and Sunshine
Drinking some whiskey!

Martie was already dancing
Doreen was sitting at the bar
The guy behind the counter was so cute
She won't be going far

Kathleen was doing a boogie
Wynter was matching her groove
So was WhtDove, Nan, and Charisma
Man those ladies can move!

Looking over my shoulder
Dgvarner was now standing at the mike
Then Coco, Claire and Isis joined in
Singing about the guys they like

Kethry played darts
What awesome aim
When she hit a patron's chair
She just smiled and gave Cerenity the blame

Sunnyone and Melissa had a drinking contest underway
Poet deVine never missed the quarter in the cup
Poor VAS was in the bathroom
Helping Dark Angel throwing up

Attention now turns to the door
Marsha walks in sparkles shining bright
With Rainbow Girl right beside her
They're a beautiful sight

Denise and Hoot Owl
Have now taken over the bar
Passing out the drinks
And hiding the keys to Lone Wolf's car

I see all the Elizabeths'
They've got their GO-GO boots on
The music is just crazy
And here's Tracie, graceful as a swan

I just laugh and smile
I hope this night never ends
I really needed this time
Out with my girlfriends!
~SEA~

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1 posted 2001-03-23 09:17 AM


LOL! Well you can put me anywhere, just NOT in the bathroom helping Dark Angel throw up! LOL
Wonderful, Sea!

"Often the test of courage is not to die but to live"

~Vittorio Alferi~

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2 posted 2001-03-23 09:23 AM


Just A Woman wasn't one
to be sitting off to the side
she grabbed my arm and off we went
to do The Electric Slide!

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3 posted 2001-03-23 09:35 AM


too cute! Now I know why my head hurts....
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4 posted 2001-03-23 09:40 AM


Then after ya'll had your fun, round up the guys, the party's just begun....*S*
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5 posted 2001-03-23 11:45 AM


Kathleen was doing what? Ha Ha!!!!
"Shake your bootie" You know I wouldn't mind being at that bar, especially a nice shot of Irish Whiskey, yes you heard me right! Lord knows I could use it right about now..... Ha SEA you are the best.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 03-23-2001).]

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6 posted 2001-03-23 12:03 PM


Sunshine~ hair of the dog

PK~ I am SO there!

Kathleen~ I bet you could put a few of us under the table

~SEA

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7 posted 2001-03-23 12:39 PM


This poem sounds like every nite here in new orleans. *S*
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8 posted 2001-03-23 01:01 PM


might I just say that this poem is cool!!!!

I love it SEA. . . .LOL  

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9 posted 2001-03-23 01:12 PM


PK~ I don't think I could handle partying every night.....every once in a while sure is good though

Sven~ thank you

~SEA

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10 posted 2001-03-23 01:37 PM


SEA--he's right tho....is why it floods regularly here, is a spiritual washing away of sins! And this does sound like fun...and I am still recuperating from the last nite out with the girls! "too old to rock and roll, and still too young to die!" Thanks for the fun!
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11 posted 2001-03-23 05:01 PM


yeah, he was cute... sophisticated....and very attentive and when i asked for a stiff one, he quickly complied

it was hard to leave, alright!
and i had fun! especially when he asked me out to breakfast afterward

but that's another poem entirely

amusing little party you've thrown here, ms SEA.... i sea that a little levity and enjoyment becomes you....


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12 posted 2001-03-23 05:56 PM


ROFLMAO!!!!! Great party, SEA!!!!!!

You all are fun!!!!

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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13 posted 2001-03-23 07:00 PM


SEA,

what do you mean poor Vas?

you mean, POOR ME, sheesh you got me throwing up, er why am I the one throwing up? hmmmm.

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14 posted 2001-03-23 07:14 PM


Serenity~ I bet it's a wild time there.........

Doreen~ glad you had such fun

LW~

DA~ I'm sorry, I warned you about playing quarters with Poet deVine.......she's goooood........

~SEA

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 03-23-2001).]

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15 posted 2001-03-23 10:37 PM


errrr you did ? errrr when ?
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16 posted 2001-03-23 11:05 PM


We had a really great time...
yes it was a girlie-girl blast.
We danced on the tables
we drank shots down really fast.

We were just getting started
when the bartender said "Last Call"
But we werent ready to quit ...
NO way ... Not even .. NO not at all.

So Serenity said come back to my place
We can keep this party going there.
So we all headed over to her house...
she was sure the "BF monster" wouldnt care

So we drank and danced all night
we had the biggest slumber party of all time
we shot Tequila chasers
then cooled the burn with the salted lime.

But as the night progressed
we got oh so very HUNGRY
(Not what you thought I was gonna say)ROFL
so Sen said she call in
and we'd get a pizza delivery ...

So we ordered our favorite toppings
and extra cheese brought us extra joy
and you know we requested a special order
For every poet ... we got our OWN PIZZA BOY!!!



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17 posted 2001-03-23 11:20 PM


"we shot Tequila chasers
then cooled the burn with the salted lime."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
yea, lovin those.......yummy ( did you have to tell about the pizza boys?) shhhhhhh......quiet Janet........ SEA

DA~it was when I called you........your brain must still be swimming SEA

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18 posted 2001-03-23 11:52 PM


SEA, er I don't think so

hehe maybe you are talking about another Dark Angel? possibly.

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19 posted 2001-03-24 12:34 PM


Very cool write
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20 posted 2001-03-24 09:47 AM


Woohoo!

Happy to be along for the party SEA ... now what I'd love to do
is actually make this a reality, LOL ...I need a good night out with the girls!

Loved this!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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21 posted 2001-03-24 10:18 AM


What a party! My invitation musta gotten lost in the mail. Got many laughs from this...thanks!
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22 posted 2001-03-24 10:19 AM


DA~ I guess it must have been..............

Mariee~ thank you

Kit~ I'd really like one too.......we'd have so much fun......... glad you enjoyed this


JLR~ add a verse adding yourself in!!! Honest, I tried to get everyone in there, it would have been a VERY long poem if I actually had gotten all the ladies in here So please, just add yourself in.......
maybe you just came late.......we can keep the party going


~SEA

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 03-24-2001).]

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23 posted 2001-03-24 10:33 AM


Sea--Fun, fun, fun!!!
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24 posted 2001-03-25 09:42 PM


this was a fun read...


Greeneyes~


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25 posted 2001-03-27 12:29 PM


Darn it, Kathleen... Sunshine and I said we'd SHARE our Irish whiskey... but you gave the bottle back empty! LOL

This is great, SEA... Thanks for a great party!!! (And JM.... shhhhhhh about those pizza boys! *G*)

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26 posted 2001-03-27 12:52 PM


Suthern, who said I'd share my Irish....no way I'd share Jose, either...

Quit giving away all the good stuff girl...keep some for US....

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27 posted 2001-03-27 12:56 PM


wait a minute....Jose' is with me............but I'll share  
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28 posted 2001-03-28 09:30 AM


Ummmmm, Sunshine? (sly grin, cough cough) I might share my whiskey but NEVER my Irish! LOL (Now which one of those pizza boys speaks Gaelic? LOL)

You can keep Jose, SEA... *G* I'll take the El Patron Gold! LOL.

Yup... suthern likes the good stuff. *G*

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Well, I prefer a Sierra Nevada Pale Ale......Or a Corona with lime...... yea, I'm a beer kinda gal.....   
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30 posted 2001-04-03 09:58 PM


Sweetie Sea, I apologize for my tardy reply...
This poem is soooo adorable I loved every word...
And honestly, a nite out like this would be such a treat...
Thank you PoetFriend for the giggles as I very much enjoyed this read...
Hugs2Ualways
*coco*


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31 posted 2001-04-04 10:59 AM


Sea,
Darts! DARTS!! Now I'm offended. Me a world famous knife thrower and you have me throwing darts. It's no wonder I missed...or did I. Just who was sitting in the chair?

Very funny write. lol.

Kethry

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