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Parker
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0 posted 2001-03-23 04:38 AM


Lace

Let me look at you once again
No wait, just as you are in that lace
It barely hides that nakedness, you flaunt
And my desire for you like a flood, won't subside

If I could kiss you a thousand times tonight
It would not be enough to satisfy this held hunger
That explosive energy when we are one, Oh love I'm lost
My mind is a spiraling chaos, in this need to taste your woman-ness

You are my black widow with your web of lust,
I am but your prey, flaying franticly poisoned by your sweetness
My mind so drunkenly consumed as your blissful bite imprisons me
Like the spider I could die after having you again, never knowing I am dead

Oh love; let me take you, again and again to that moment
Where haze is the chaos that is my lips upon the heat of a burning sun
When your pleasure is the arch of a moment taken to eternity in the gasps of a breath
Oh, let me breath you in as I taste your need to have what I live to give you again and again

Love, my lips will chase and run down your every curve until you beg stop
Knowing that stop is not what you want and your voice is just an echo of weakness
I can see hunger in your eye's as my hands run over your skin warming with each touch
Here let me remove those straps dear, I know you want to rush but I love to see you in that lace.

James Parker Haley Nov 6, 2000 (just released)

[This message has been edited by Parker (edited 03-23-2001).]

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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-03-23 05:14 AM


"Just released!" I'm glad you released it!!!!! wow.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Dee
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2 posted 2001-03-23 06:06 AM


Parker, you always seem to be able to touch my heart with your work. This is so beautiful and heartfelt. I love it.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Just A Woman
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3 posted 2001-03-23 07:23 AM


"My lips will chase and run down your every curve" Oh beautiful! I would say, Parker, that you've captured the love and passion well here.

"When people show you who they are, believe them"

~Maya Angelou~

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2001-03-23 07:42 AM


If I could kiss you a thousand times tonight
It would not be enough to satisfy this held hunger
That explosive energy when we are one, Oh love I'm lost
My mind is a spiraling chaos, in this need to taste your woman-ness

You are my black widow with your web of lust,
I am but your prey, flaying franticly poisoned by your sweetness
My mind so drunkenly consumed as your blissful bite imprisons me
Like the spider I could die after having you again, never knowing I am dead

Oh love; let me take you, again and again to that moment
Where haze is the chaos that is my lips upon the heat of a burning sun
When your pleasure is the arch of a moment taken to eternity in the gasps of a breath
Oh, let me breath you in as I taste your need to have what I live to give you again and again

Love, my lips will chase and run down your every curve until you beg stop
Knowing that stop is not what you want and your voice is just an echo of weakness
I can see hunger in your eye's as my hands run over your skin warming with each touch
Here let me remove those straps dear, I know you want to rush but I love to see you in that lace.
=========================

OH LORD ... have some mercy on us will ya sweet tease ..
WOW ... someone get me my pedestals labeled PASSIONATE POET!!!
whew ..I wont be needing raspberry tea this morn ... this poem is like aphrodesiac cat nip ........


Oh love; let me take you, again and again to that moment
Where haze is the chaos that is my lips upon the heat of a burning sun
When your pleasure is the arch of a moment taken to eternity in the gasps of a breath
Oh, let me breath you in as I taste your need to have what I live to give you again and again

Love, my lips will chase and run down your every curve until you beg stop
Knowing that stop is not what you want and your voice is just an echo of weakness"

all teasing aside, this is awesome P-man
wonderful empassioned write...
why ya been hiding this beauty for so long.
excellent emotive express here!!
what else ya got hidden under the bed
bring on all the chaos you got LOL.
You write em ... I'll bring the pedestals

oh you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
my body aches to breathe your breath
your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

SEA
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5 posted 2001-03-23 08:58 AM


Damn......I can't breathe........I.......I........My goodness Parker..........you made my knees weak..........
Sunshine
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6 posted 2001-03-23 10:14 AM


Um...what SEA said....whew

inot2B
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7 posted 2001-03-23 12:52 PM


"You are my black widow with your web of lust,
I am but your prey, flaying franticly poisoned by your sweetness
My mind so drunkenly consumed as your blissful bite imprisons me
Like the spider I could die after having you again, never knowing I am dead"


Is it in here or what?
You don't have to worry about the black widow. I don't think she'll dispose of you. Heck, she'll want you to do this everyday.
OVER & OVER & OVER & OVER & OVER & OVER

serenity blaze
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8 posted 2001-03-23 02:44 PM


DAMN. I am speechless and my mind is sorta foggy now...wow. Just wow, parker...anything more than that might get me in trouble!
Paula Finn
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9 posted 2001-03-23 03:03 PM


darlin Parker...why is it you didnt record this one? This would just pour like honey from your lips...and I for one would love hearing you say this to me...let me just find that black lace gown....aaahhhhhh here it is....whisper to me
Parker
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10 posted 2001-03-23 03:48 PM


Irish Rose, well I wasn't sure of it. Thank you.

Dee, thank you kindly.

Just A Woman, well thank you.

Janet, thank you browneye's, oh nothing hidden under the bed.

SEA, nothing like a woman with weak knees.

inot2B, thanks.

serenity, and since when have you been afraid of trouble.

Paul, well I don't know.. does anybody want to hear me recite it.
well if I get a few requests maybe, just maybe.

Parker



SEA
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11 posted 2001-03-23 03:52 PM


Parker~ I for one would LOVE to hear you say these words.........but not to Paula....to me say them to me..........I have red lace handsome give us ladies a thrill......read it to us......pppplllleeeeaaaasssseee..........SEA
serenity blaze
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12 posted 2001-03-23 03:59 PM


I have a pair of lace stockings! guess those would have to suffice, eh?

I too, would love to hear this one read, or whispered, or....mmmmmmmm....or? you could just have it tatooed on my butt! IN BRAILLE!!

[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 03-23-2001).]

Parker
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13 posted 2001-03-23 04:05 PM


SEA, mmmmm red lace... sounds very nice I could do that.

serenity, I hear they make flavoured tatoo's, I wonder what they'd taste like.
and is that all you'd be wearing...

Damn, now i'm getting warm.

[This message has been edited by Parker (edited 03-23-2001).]

JamesMichael
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14 posted 2001-03-23 04:20 PM


A fantastically sensual write Parker...now I'm really missing my sweetheart...James
Janet Marie
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15 posted 2001-03-23 06:00 PM


Are you trying to start a Riot baby????? LOL

and DO WE want to hear it????
Ummm.....aint that like asking do we want
oxygen and sunshine??

AND by the way all the gator girls are
telling ya what they will have on ...

what will YOU be wearing...
a smile and a cowboy hat???? ROFL ...

yeah,.... that will do it....
that and you standing on a pedestal while you recite it LOL

bring it on P-man...I gotta lace butterfly tattoo hahhaha

this threads headed for the adult forum....
I just know it!! LOL

oh you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
my body aches to breathe your breath
your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

Dee
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16 posted 2001-03-23 06:18 PM


I could think of nothing better than to hear the poet recite his words.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Marina
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17 posted 2001-03-24 02:56 PM


I love this one! Very sensaul and sexy.

You should have recited it. The women might even swoon!


marina

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Marina Crossley



Parker
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18 posted 2001-03-25 01:21 PM


James, thank you very much.

Janet, well you've given me lots to think about here.

Dee, well I'm working on it.

Marina, nothing like a healthy swoon.

Parker

dgvarner
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19 posted 2001-03-27 01:23 PM


mmm...I was sure of it..     glad you finished it...and glad i popped in today and found it!

very sensual..very yummy...i wanna be her...!!  

i've got a little black lace and velvet...  
how bout all us girls tuck our stuff into our lace and you give us that recital... !!

wonderful to read you love...    hugs, g

where am i...WHOA! and what am i doing in this handbasket!?!

Parker
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20 posted 2001-03-27 02:38 PM


yeah yeah, dg, everybody in hear is claiming to have lace.... but nobody is sending me proof... so a little pic to prove it.  


Parker

devina
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21 posted 2001-03-27 03:20 PM


I guess you've been busy while I've been away sweet man...missed your style much, I did...The title reminded me of  Stevie Nick's "Leather & Lace"  Very Nice...

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



helen smith
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22 posted 2001-03-27 03:27 PM


awwwwwwwww         my mouth fell open      and i am still here    ..  entranced
Corinne
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23 posted 2001-03-27 03:29 PM


Yikes, Park, hmmm, well, uh, yes, this is, most, um, definitely HOT!

Cor

Tara Simms
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24 posted 2001-03-27 04:35 PM


Mmmm, you outdid yourself with this one.  I loved it!
dgvarner
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25 posted 2001-03-27 09:48 PM


pic??  hmm..i try to stay out of those--a little shy am i..but i'll send you the the little black number if you like and you can imagine......

, gale

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 03-27-2001).]

Parker
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26 posted 2001-03-28 01:43 AM


ok send away...  
dgvarner
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27 posted 2001-03-28 09:34 PM




youre such a devil....  


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28 posted 2001-03-29 04:01 PM


Yanno... you really need to arrange for little fans to switch on as we read this... or powerful air conditioners! LOL. Great work!
Parker
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29 posted 2001-04-03 02:07 PM


dg, I am sometimes....  


suthern, if I blow on the screen will that work...  

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