Open Poetry #13 |
Lace.... (recite it or not?) |
Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Lace Let me look at you once again No wait, just as you are in that lace It barely hides that nakedness, you flaunt And my desire for you like a flood, won't subside If I could kiss you a thousand times tonight It would not be enough to satisfy this held hunger That explosive energy when we are one, Oh love I'm lost My mind is a spiraling chaos, in this need to taste your woman-ness You are my black widow with your web of lust, I am but your prey, flaying franticly poisoned by your sweetness My mind so drunkenly consumed as your blissful bite imprisons me Like the spider I could die after having you again, never knowing I am dead Oh love; let me take you, again and again to that moment Where haze is the chaos that is my lips upon the heat of a burning sun When your pleasure is the arch of a moment taken to eternity in the gasps of a breath Oh, let me breath you in as I taste your need to have what I live to give you again and again Love, my lips will chase and run down your every curve until you beg stop Knowing that stop is not what you want and your voice is just an echo of weakness I can see hunger in your eye's as my hands run over your skin warming with each touch Here let me remove those straps dear, I know you want to rush but I love to see you in that lace. James Parker Haley Nov 6, 2000 (just released) [This message has been edited by Parker (edited 03-23-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"Just released!" I'm glad you released it!!!!! wow. Kathleen Blake |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Parker, you always seem to be able to touch my heart with your work. This is so beautiful and heartfelt. I love it. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
"My lips will chase and run down your every curve" Oh beautiful! I would say, Parker, that you've captured the love and passion well here. "When people show you who they are, believe them" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
If I could kiss you a thousand times tonight It would not be enough to satisfy this held hunger That explosive energy when we are one, Oh love I'm lost My mind is a spiraling chaos, in this need to taste your woman-ness You are my black widow with your web of lust, I am but your prey, flaying franticly poisoned by your sweetness My mind so drunkenly consumed as your blissful bite imprisons me Like the spider I could die after having you again, never knowing I am dead Oh love; let me take you, again and again to that moment Where haze is the chaos that is my lips upon the heat of a burning sun When your pleasure is the arch of a moment taken to eternity in the gasps of a breath Oh, let me breath you in as I taste your need to have what I live to give you again and again Love, my lips will chase and run down your every curve until you beg stop Knowing that stop is not what you want and your voice is just an echo of weakness I can see hunger in your eye's as my hands run over your skin warming with each touch Here let me remove those straps dear, I know you want to rush but I love to see you in that lace. ========================= OH LORD ... have some mercy on us will ya sweet tease .. WOW ... someone get me my pedestals labeled PASSIONATE POET!!! whew ..I wont be needing raspberry tea this morn ... this poem is like aphrodesiac cat nip ........ Oh love; let me take you, again and again to that moment Where haze is the chaos that is my lips upon the heat of a burning sun When your pleasure is the arch of a moment taken to eternity in the gasps of a breath Oh, let me breath you in as I taste your need to have what I live to give you again and again Love, my lips will chase and run down your every curve until you beg stop Knowing that stop is not what you want and your voice is just an echo of weakness" all teasing aside, this is awesome P-man wonderful empassioned write... why ya been hiding this beauty for so long. excellent emotive express here!! what else ya got hidden under the bed bring on all the chaos you got LOL. You write em ... I'll bring the pedestals oh you speak to me in riddles |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Damn......I can't breathe........I.......I........My goodness Parker..........you made my knees weak.......... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Um...what SEA said....whew |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
"You are my black widow with your web of lust, I am but your prey, flaying franticly poisoned by your sweetness My mind so drunkenly consumed as your blissful bite imprisons me Like the spider I could die after having you again, never knowing I am dead" Is it in here or what? You don't have to worry about the black widow. I don't think she'll dispose of you. Heck, she'll want you to do this everyday. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
DAMN. I am speechless and my mind is sorta foggy now...wow. Just wow, parker...anything more than that might get me in trouble! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
darlin Parker...why is it you didnt record this one? This would just pour like honey from your lips...and I for one would love hearing you say this to me...let me just find that black lace gown....aaahhhhhh here it is....whisper to me |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Irish Rose, well I wasn't sure of it. Thank you. Dee, thank you kindly. Just A Woman, well thank you. Janet, thank you browneye's, oh nothing hidden under the bed. SEA, nothing like a woman with weak knees. inot2B, thanks. serenity, and since when have you been afraid of trouble. Paul, well I don't know.. does anybody want to hear me recite it. well if I get a few requests maybe, just maybe. Parker |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Parker~ I for one would LOVE to hear you say these words.........but not to Paula....to me say them to me..........I have red lace handsome give us ladies a thrill......read it to us......pppplllleeeeaaaasssseee..........SEA |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I have a pair of lace stockings! guess those would have to suffice, eh? I too, would love to hear this one read, or whispered, or....mmmmmmmm....or? you could just have it tatooed on my butt! IN BRAILLE!! [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 03-23-2001).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
SEA, mmmmm red lace... sounds very nice I could do that. serenity, I hear they make flavoured tatoo's, I wonder what they'd taste like. and is that all you'd be wearing... Damn, now i'm getting warm. [This message has been edited by Parker (edited 03-23-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A fantastically sensual write Parker...now I'm really missing my sweetheart...James |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Are you trying to start a Riot baby????? LOL and DO WE want to hear it???? Ummm.....aint that like asking do we want oxygen and sunshine?? AND by the way all the gator girls are telling ya what they will have on ... what will YOU be wearing... a smile and a cowboy hat???? ROFL ... yeah,.... that will do it.... that and you standing on a pedestal while you recite it LOL bring it on P-man...I gotta lace butterfly tattoo hahhaha this threads headed for the adult forum.... I just know it!! LOL oh you speak to me in riddles |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
I could think of nothing better than to hear the poet recite his words. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I love this one! Very sensaul and sexy. You should have recited it. The women might even swoon! marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
James, thank you very much. Janet, well you've given me lots to think about here. Dee, well I'm working on it. Marina, nothing like a healthy swoon. Parker |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
mmm...I was sure of it.. glad you finished it...and glad i popped in today and found it! very sensual..very yummy...i wanna be her...!! i've got a little black lace and velvet... how bout all us girls tuck our stuff into our lace and you give us that recital... !! wonderful to read you love... hugs, g where am i...WHOA! and what am i doing in this handbasket!?! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
yeah yeah, dg, everybody in hear is claiming to have lace.... but nobody is sending me proof... so a little pic to prove it. Parker |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I guess you've been busy while I've been away sweet man...missed your style much, I did...The title reminded me of Stevie Nick's "Leather & Lace" Very Nice... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
awwwwwwwww my mouth fell open and i am still here .. entranced |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Yikes, Park, hmmm, well, uh, yes, this is, most, um, definitely HOT! Cor |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Mmmm, you outdid yourself with this one. I loved it! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
pic?? hmm..i try to stay out of those--a little shy am i..but i'll send you the the little black number if you like and you can imagine...... , gale [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 03-27-2001).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
ok send away... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
youre such a devil.... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yanno... you really need to arrange for little fans to switch on as we read this... or powerful air conditioners! LOL. Great work! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
dg, I am sometimes.... suthern, if I blow on the screen will that work... |
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