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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2001-03-22 02:27 PM


Flavors on my lips
Memories of kisses shared
My tongue lingers there

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-03-22 02:28 PM


me likes...
Honeybee
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2 posted 2001-03-22 05:23 PM



ooooh, yes, me likes this too Very well expressed, especially the last line!~

Take care,
Melissa~

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3 posted 2001-03-22 06:31 PM


Sweet memories!!!
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4 posted 2001-03-22 08:32 PM


Excellent! I loved this!

"When people show you who they are, believe them"

~Maya Angelou~

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5 posted 2001-03-23 12:02 PM


Paula~
Very effectively done.
I like the thoughts.
~*Marge*~

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Paula Finn
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6 posted 2001-03-23 01:56 AM


Karilea...lol good!!!

Melissa...guess I did something right here huh? thanks

inot2B...sweeter when shared...thanks

JustAWoman...thanks very much

Marge...Im glad you like this...thanks

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2001-03-23 03:02 AM


I imagine I have lots of memories on my lips also...James
Parker
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8 posted 2001-03-23 04:41 AM


Paula, that last line is a killer.

Parker

Paula Finn
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9 posted 2001-03-23 02:48 PM


James...I thought you might like this one...

Parker...you like that huh? Feel free darlin to use it...

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10 posted 2001-03-23 04:01 PM


Sounds like a very tasty kiss.....

Bernie

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11 posted 2001-03-23 04:07 PM


oh yes. I like a lot. The lips are the most beautiful things, next to the eyes that is.
Paula Finn
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12 posted 2001-03-24 03:04 AM


Bernie...well come find out for yourself...hehehe

PoeticKnight...especially when one devotes enough time exploring them...thnaks

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13 posted 2001-03-24 03:05 AM


Hmmm...yeah...I'm with ya on this one! Great write!

sp

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk into the room...

Paula Finn
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14 posted 2001-03-25 01:19 AM


sp...thanks sweetie....
ethome
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15 posted 2001-04-12 06:57 PM


Oh you've been kissing someone that tastes extra special.......fun ain't it?   Good one Paula!
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16 posted 2001-04-12 07:06 PM


Gotta love that last line!  You do these so well.

Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter

Paula Finn
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17 posted 2001-04-14 04:19 AM


ethome...maybe just dreaming of that kiss

JLR...thanks sweetie...sometimes they are all that comes when I put pen to paper

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