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Split Persona

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green_itchy_stuff
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since 06-26-2003
Posts 1937
New Caney, Tx


0 posted 09-20-2003 02:10 PM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for green_itchy_stuff


I do
I can
Get the best of you
Hurt me
Break me
Run away with you

Sentiment and foreplay
I hear it deep inside
Lovely lady
Pretty girl
I dont want to see you cry

Silence and poor aptitude
Strangled with an attitude
A stencil in this world
Scribble out the heart
I rape myself and fall apart

I do
I can
Get the best of you
Hurt me
Break me
Run away with you

An impulse, sweet desire
Paradise built on fire
These feelings take away
Concentrate, a better life
I'd see you everyday

Yin to yang the atmosphere
The one you never hear
Gorgeous you
And perfect soul
A flawless body too

I do
I can
Get the best of you
Hurt me
Break me
Run away with you

Someone else, another place
I'd love you even more
could have been
Should've been
Dirty little whore

Best if I can do the most
Kiss you on your lips
Your bleeding face
Apology
My bloody finger tips

I do
I can
Get the best of you
Hurt me
Break me
Reappear without you

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

© Copyright 2003 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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since 03-02-2003
Posts 9998
New York


1 posted 09-20-2003 06:46 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Craig:

I loved this . .

I rape myself and fall apart

what an amazing line . . .
keep pouring your heart out please

xxoo
serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 02-02-2000
Posts 28839


2 posted 09-20-2003 10:35 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

The repetition in this not only drove the point home, but made gave this the essence of a piece of music.

And sue quoted my favorite line too.

Enjoyed the read m'friend.
green_itchy_stuff
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since 06-26-2003
Posts 1937
New Caney, Tx


3 posted 09-21-2003 06:44 AM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for green_itchy_stuff

Thanx littlewing,  your a really good poet and I enjoy your poems too.

Thanx serenity,  Actually I put some guitar riffs to it yesterday.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

Insomniac Cat
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since 09-23-2003
Posts 70
The Land of the Dadaists


4 posted 09-23-2003 12:15 PM       View Profile for Insomniac Cat   Email Insomniac Cat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Insomniac Cat

I too liked the rhythym of this poem. Something you could sing or rap.
green_itchy_stuff
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since 06-26-2003
Posts 1937
New Caney, Tx


5 posted 09-24-2003 10:44 PM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for green_itchy_stuff

Thanx insomniac cat- its nice to see someone else enjoyed this piece.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

click1
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since 03-25-2003
Posts 156
usa


6 posted 09-25-2003 06:30 PM       View Profile for click1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for click1

Dude! I want to hear it!!  I put my own riffs in as I was reading!  Good Job!! Very well put together and looked great as I read it...

                                    Thanx!!!

Click

River
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since 09-16-2003
Posts 623
my own little world


7 posted 09-26-2003 07:30 PM       View Profile for River   Email River   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for River

wow, this reminds me of rap or something...groovy job, lookin good bro =)

"The Red, it filters through" - Chevelle

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 06-26-2003
Posts 1937
New Caney, Tx


8 posted 09-26-2003 07:39 PM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for green_itchy_stuff

thanx River.

Click if you want to hear it e-mail me and after i pratice a lil bit maybe something can work out so that can happen.

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

mytuesdaywishes
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since 09-05-2003
Posts 257
a voice from the musicbox


9 posted 09-29-2003 06:29 PM       View Profile for mytuesdaywishes   Email mytuesdaywishes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mytuesdaywishes

you get me every time...damn
oh, and your name is still my favorite

and even when everything was wrong, and we were mad at the world, it was still beautiful.

 
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