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Out Of My Big Mouth
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Out Of My Big Mouth |
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Defective Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 73Salisbury NC |
So strong on the outside so weak within this heart beats softly smothered in sin. Invisible hurt incomparable pain every drink I take brings me closer to sane. I feel so light yet I can't stand up tears stream my face as my crimson lipstick stains this cup. Tragic as this all may seem I live it everyday can't break myself of this disease just wish it would go away. [This message has been edited by Defective (09-19-2003 11:58 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kristen: my heart to you for such an honest write I do know of this evil May God be with you beautiful writing Welcome to PIP! Please check your email for a special greeting from all of us here at Passions! xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (09-20-2003 03:16 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You have my knowing sympathy. It's hell when the old "comfort" tricks no longer work. There's more of us than most realize. Love and luck to you. |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
I like this write, for it's reason and also rhyme. "Brings me closer to sane". This line is intriguing. Courageous equals your first poem,and first base. Keep writing, lets see what's on second. Nice write. mysticpoe If nothing is something then everything is our thoughts and feelings and all that exists. [This message has been edited by mysticpoe (09-27-2003 10:18 PM).] |
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click1 Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 152usa |
Well put.. when we see things in this light..well...as you said.. thanx!! Click |
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