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Out Of My Big Mouth

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Defective
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since 09-19-2003
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Salisbury NC


0 posted 09-19-2003 11:47 PM       View Profile for Defective   Email Defective   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Defective

So strong on the outside
so weak within
this heart beats softly
smothered in sin.

Invisible hurt
incomparable pain
every drink I take
brings me closer to sane.

I feel so  light
yet I can't stand up
tears stream my face
as my crimson lipstick stains this cup.

Tragic as this all may seem
I live it everyday
can't break myself of this disease
just wish it would go away.


[This message has been edited by Defective (09-19-2003 11:58 PM).]

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littlewing
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since 03-02-2003
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1 posted 09-20-2003 03:13 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Kristen:

my heart to you for such an honest write
I do know of this evil
May God be with you
beautiful writing
Welcome to PIP!
Please check your email for a
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xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (09-20-2003 03:16 AM).]

serenity blaze
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2 posted 09-24-2003 03:12 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

You have my knowing sympathy.

It's hell when the old "comfort" tricks no longer work.

There's more of us than most realize.

Love and luck to you.
mysticpoe
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since 02-28-2003
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3 posted 09-27-2003 10:17 PM       View Profile for mysticpoe   Email mysticpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mysticpoe

I like this write, for it's reason and also rhyme. "Brings me closer to sane". This line is intriguing. Courageous equals your first poem,and first base. Keep writing, lets see what's on second. Nice write.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

[This message has been edited by mysticpoe (09-27-2003 10:18 PM).]

click1
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since 03-25-2003
Posts 156
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4 posted 09-28-2003 07:44 PM       View Profile for click1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for click1

Well put.. when we see things in this light..well...as you said..

              thanx!!

Click

 
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