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blackhalo
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0 posted 09-18-2003 03:24 AM       View Profile for blackhalo   Email blackhalo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit blackhalo's Home Page   View IP for blackhalo

Macabre
The only word inside to describe me
The way I feel

Webster says grim
I suppose
More...
Suicidal
Suffocating
Myself
Bleeding
From wounds inflicted for death
Then drowning
Somewhere
In a mix of my own
Syrup-slick blood and sea-salt tears
Cried from these eyes of mine
Because you could never be kind
Kind enough.....
Nevermind.

pll T MK m, PLL t MK M, PLL + MK l

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eor
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since 09-26-2002
Posts 968
blues & greys


1 posted 09-18-2003 12:38 PM       View Profile for eor   Email eor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eor

i am sorry...i wish people were kind to you... ...i liked this write

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

green_itchy_stuff
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since 06-26-2003
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New Caney, Tx


2 posted 09-18-2003 12:46 PM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for green_itchy_stuff

People are jerks every now and then.  The last word "Nevermind" made me smile though.  
Just something about that word.....  Nice write.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

mysticpoe
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3 posted 09-27-2003 10:26 PM       View Profile for mysticpoe   Email mysticpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mysticpoe

very intensive write and emotional out-poor. The poetic vehicle always seems to do this best.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

 
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