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green_itchy_stuff
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New Caney, Tx


0 posted 09-18-2003 01:02 AM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for green_itchy_stuff


Shards of weakness shred masses of might
Warrior
Wet fingers pick through whats left

Stench and friction
Remnants of fear
Scattered minds
Afraid

A quiet city
Empty now
Hazy clouds from the torrential flames that burnt
All is still
Ash

Lack of desire to say no
Confide in themselves
Never speak of the rashness of horror
And accept life as not

Hold another
No need to rush
Gather some sleep

A chance for a wilted tomorrow
Fade away
Relax and sleep.

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

© Copyright 2003 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
eor
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blues & greys


1 posted 09-18-2003 01:49 AM       View Profile for eor   Email eor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eor

good write, kind of reminds me of 9-11

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

green_itchy_stuff
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New Caney, Tx


2 posted 09-18-2003 12:43 PM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for green_itchy_stuff

I hadnt thought of that yet.  Good observation.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

River
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my own little world


3 posted 09-18-2003 07:17 PM       View Profile for River   Email River   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for River

very nice, i liked all, the one part that sticks out to me the most is: "A quiet city
Empty now
Hazy clouds from the torrential flames that burnt
All is still
Ash"
groovy bro. =)
the whole thing was great!

"The Red, it filters through" - Chevelle

green_itchy_stuff
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New Caney, Tx


4 posted 09-19-2003 12:12 AM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for green_itchy_stuff

Thanx River,  I do my best.

GIS
mysticpoe
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5 posted 09-27-2003 10:30 PM       View Profile for mysticpoe   Email mysticpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mysticpoe

Nice write GIS, still can see the bellowing smoke savoring the aftermath. Nice piece.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

 
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